All Comments on 'My Petite Fiancée Surprises Me Pt. 02'

Keep the story going. Good job

Thanks very much for encouragement! It means a lot! I really hope that some people will enjoy reading these as I enjoyed writing them.

Yes, I agree: Good job. His GF obviously "gets off" controlling him. Steadily she is also making him picture her sister's body and how she fills out her clothing. Eventually, of course, she will turn him into a sex-toy for her sister to enjoy! With her supervising, of course. Cheers.

Excellent

Look forward to next chapter.

Not much sexual but I like the story line.

I was going to give you 4 because it doesn't have much nudity but you did warn that it is slow building and I like the characters.

Solid platform to move forward.

Please keep it up! It’s getting so good !! 5 stars all around 👌🏼

Why are you worried? Enjoy it!

I don't read too many dirty stories with stream of consciousness :)

I love the back and forth with your girlfriend as she makes you cum. I can't tell if you are shy or just insecure about your relationship with your girlfriend.

Too much wasted dialogue. Started losing interest by halfway point.

I really like this, looking forward to reading more. But I wonder why he can't fuck her anymore?

Love the slow burn on this!