by EroticCupcake
I have read your whole story and love it! I am somewhat nonplussed by your main character, however!! It’s your story, but the idea of any man not enjoying seeing one naked woman beating another naked woman with a riding crop seems unlikely to me!! Of course, I’m a dirty old man, but I’d not only get off on it, I’d be trying to get her to smack her on the cunt a few times!! But I guess that’s just me!!