All Comments on 'My Release'

I think your lame story is rather flat and boring to me. Maybe you should try to write a slow beginning and gradually increasing your arousing state (pretending you yourself getting involved and aroused). Then after prolonged erotic actions you get finally too much and longed for finishing climax(es) at last...

Djoni S. Sidik, Indonesia (male)

I liked it. The way you describe your desire and need was very erotic for this reader.

Your story is far from lame. If I read it correctly, it is an instruction manual for a man to use in order to give you a satisfactory lovemaking experience. Bravo. If more women were willing to instruct their lover, more of them would get satisfied. Very sensual. Please keep writing.