My Rival / My Rival Ch. 05

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As we were lying in bed together, I once again realized how special it was to hold her in my arms. In that moment, I knew I could never live without her, because she had given me more than I could ever ask from anyone in the world.

Once we finally took a moment to catch our breaths, I looked the wonderful woman in her beautiful eyes... and confidently said, "I love you, McKayla."

With the most gorgeous smile on her face, she looked back at me exclaimed, "I love you too, Emily."

From that moment on, I knew I no longer had anything to ever feel insecure about, because as long as I had McKayla by my side, nothing else would ever matter. And that's the story of how she went from being my rival... to my lover.

The end

***

Bonus

McKayla

So that was our story. Emily and I worked our way through the string of lies Tom and Brian tried to pull on us. I forgave her for not believing me when I tried to convince her I was genuine, and it was all peaches and cream from there.

That was how we reached our happily ever after, but... that wasn't the way our night ended. Maybe an hour later, after things calmed down between us... I decided I hadn't completely forgiven Emily for not trusting me... Total forgiveness required... a little more punishment...

"OH MY GOD!" Emily moaned as I pounded her from behind with my strap-on. I held onto her little hips, rocking myself back and forth, as she cried out, "I'm sorry for ever doubting you, Baby!"

Pulling her long blonde locks, I gave her a nice spank on her hot little ass as I thrusted her with my toy. "Yeah, you're a bad girl. That's why you're getting your brains fucked out from behind!"

"Ugh! You're right! I'm such a bad girl! I deserve this!"

Every time I gave her bubble butt a nice little smack, Emily whimpered in such an adorable manner. I almost felt bad about how hard I was fucking her... even though that naughty little girl was enjoying it.

"Everyone thinks you're so sweet and innocent, but when we're behind closed doors, we both know you're my bad girl!"

"Yes! I'm your bad girl!" she cried out, now bouncing her ass so hard against me, our bodies were clapping together. "I deserve to get spanked and fucked like this!"

I noticed her quivering moans growing even more high-pitched. Her hot body was straining so hard, I knew it was only a matter of seconds before I had her exploding with pleasure. "Is my bad girl about to cum?" I asked, pulling her hips into me.

"Yes! I'm going to... I'm going to..."

As I gave her one final thrust, as hard as I could, deep into her flooded pussy, Emily let out the deepest moan of her life before her body absolutely crumbled to the pleasure. She was left shaking as the sensation continued to ripple through her weakened body.

Once I let go of my girlfriend's hips, she immediately collapsed onto the mattress. I leaned my body into her, giving her a kiss on the back of her shoulder. "How was that?"

A cute little smile came over her face as she closed her eyes and rested her head. "I loved it!"

"I loved it too... and you know what else I love?"

"Me?"

"Yes! I love you, Emily."

"I love you too, McKayla."

"Good... Now get your ass back up so I can fuck you again."

"Baby!"

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AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

Just have to come back to read this one every so often. You really do have a way with words.

mfs686mfs6863 months ago

Well done! Definitely a different take on the “don’t judge a person before you walk a mile in their shoes” phrase. All that perceived hate that never really was.

RideACowgirlRideACowgirl3 months ago

You write the most flawed but lovable unreliable narrators on the site. Love it!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

This is the first story of yours I have read, and I must say it won’t be my last. This was an amazing story that was superbly written! I was hooked from the start. Like many others, I found myself reading for the story, not just the sex. But don’t get me wrong, the sexy parts were amazing! Kinda bummed you didn’t write some kind of revenge that the girls had planned for Brian & Tom….those assholes! I’m really surprised neither one got punched in the nose… Was just hoping to see that they got what they deserved I guess. Lol Just felt like I need that epic revenge prologue…haha!

Anyway…amazing story and writing, and I look forward to reading more of your work! Thank you for sharing your talent!

PastaManPastaMan9 months ago

I came to literotica to read smur, but got so much more from this story. I got giddy when they realized and proclaimed their love for each other. I got nervous when I could see the boys conspiring against them. I got enraged when the betrayal came about. And I felt a tear of relief when the truth came out and how it ended.

I started to not even care about the sex (as good as you laid out the scenes) and read for the story.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Sorry but this last chapter was a rushed and contrived let-down. Every other part was 5/5, but this “conflict” felt so forced

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Read the whole series in one sitting. Best one I have read so far. Thank you!

blackchair7blackchair7about 2 years ago

Sweet series. You wrote all their anxiety and insecurity in a really compelling and relatable way, so the tension release was palpable when they’d let each other know what they really felt.

I personally thought it could’ve done with fewer sex scenes mostly because I enjoy a slow build to something big vs a steady stream of similar encounters, but that’s just my opinion. Overall I thought it was a really enjoyable read. Five stars

LilkahunaLilkahunaabout 2 years ago

Just one comment: the past tense of thrust is thrust, not thrusted. Otherwise, cute story.

BillyslateBillyslateabout 2 years ago

Unconditionally Magnificent!!!

Absolutely loved this wonderful Story / Ch. 05 especially the bonus. Also loved the suspenseful nature of Ch. 05. I felt that Tom and Brian were up to no good, when they pointedly separated Emily / McKayla on the boat.

Love Won In The End!!!💗

A 5*-Star Chapter 05 Ending To A 5*-Star Story Series🎉

AquariusgirlAquariusgirlabout 2 years ago

I can honestly say that this story from start to finish has been one of the best things I've read. It's ended perfectly which is amazing; I still have to ask though, do you think you'll add to the 5 chapters & continue with their adventures/story? x

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