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All Comments on 'My Roomate is an Alchemist Pt. 01'

by Jubalog

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YidoSYidoSover 1 year ago

Like it. Could lead to interesting dynamics.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The pronouns sre switching between you and he. You should fix that

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

please write more

contestwinnercontestwinnerabout 1 year ago

WOOOW!!! this is a really peomising series.

contestwinnercontestwinnerabout 1 year ago

One of my new faves!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Good concept. But the continual switching between first person and third person needs to be resolved

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