All Comments on 'My Roommate the Milking Nurse Pt. 01'

Good premise.

But barely an introduction.

Set up for FUTURE sex, but nothing at all here.

You list FIVE tags. The only one that's actually in this story is NURSE.

No MILKING. No FEMDOM. No TEASING, except by sitting there. No HANDJOB.

Three stars. Being generous.

Don't leave your readers hanging. I'll not read anymore of your stories if I know you do this.

I feel like this is a half finished that got published accidentally?

Way too short.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

The series is complete, just waiting for all parts to go through the publishing process.

what a waste of my time

Guys, OP posted all the stories but clearly some were either rejected or still pending approval. This happens from time to time.

He didn't intentionally blue ball the readers.

were is this going? i ask

A story where nothing happens - at all - shouldn't be in BDSM. Not really suitable for any category as is.

Good premise.

But nothing more than a set up.

Four stars.

Good premise,

But BARELY a beginning.

Three stars.