All Comments on 'My Rose Does Bloom Ch. 00-02'

A well written story. That opening paragraph had me as if sitting where she was looking out at her yard. Great descriptive writing. That it has no real sex is okay, refreshing even, but the promise of what's to come sounds interesting.

Please continue this story. Millie is already my hero.

This is a fine story with a lovely structure and plot that is appealing to a lesbian reader. The author uses superb visual imagery and holds off the sex until you are dying to find out if Millie gets her girl. You must have a superb editor, because the work is almost error free. Millie is a heroine in the true sense of the word; you feel her internal struggle down to your toes. It’s the same struggle that many lesbians face. I can’t wait for the next chapter darling. You move me. R

Certainly a good start. As far as the (lack of) sex goes, no problem. Seemed like things moved a little fast in the taco place - would she really have been that wet that fast? But she does seem like a good hero - looking forward to the next installment.

I didn't know what to expect, never reading much erotica, but this story hooked me from the beginning.