by whatswrongwithme
As over the top as it all is, I can’t do scat. It went from an 8/10 to a -4 that quick. Please don’t bring that back as part of the story line.
First 10/10
Second 9/10, skip the shit part please… or at least nothing more than watching
A fantastic follow on. I like scat stories but don’t mind if you expand on that or not. But chapter 3 please.
Deliciously naughty. Please keep it up. Can't wait for Sally and her mum to join the fun.
Great story! Love to see where part 3 goes and what twists and fantasies will follow.
There will always be negative commentary in the posts but don't let that deter you from the story ‘you’ want to write. Well done so far, carry on the good work.
I don't mind the scat. It's all fantasy and I find it amusing that people are ok with a mom and son drinking each other's piss but freak out at the mere mention of fetishized poo. lol Just keep the story going. It's fun.
Great story, really hope you don't end it here, Can't wait for Sally and her mom to join them but the scat thing is a little to much for me.