All Comments on 'My Sensitive Son Ch. 01'

Not bad for a start. Keep writing and thanks for your time and imagination.

was spot on! However, that didn't lessen your story which was very good. I'm hoping, as I am sure other readers are, that you continue this with future chapters.

One suggestion, is that you ask for and receive a proofreader to help you improve on your writing.

Until your next chapter . . .

Keep it like this. His pretty but chunky mom is his bj toy.

Maybe it's her idea to not go further. Figures one day he'll meet a nice girl for that but for now he can focus on his school work and her mouth.

The real loving emotions come through in this story. Sometimes it is up to a good mother to help a shy, sensitive son. Often the results are very wonderful.

Your writing is a bit odd. I suggest you read a lot more of the stories here to better align with what we like.

I prefer a lot of detail on the actual sexual seduction, undressing, and cock pussy entry.

Great story! Can’t wait for more!

Masterfully crafted story of love. All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex.

I WISH, THINGS LIKE THIS COULD

REALLY HAPPEND. WELL I GUESS

SOME GUYS ARE JUST LUCKY.

GOOD READ, WELL DONE. 5*****

..THANKS..

USAF

I like

I'll be so horny I jackoff just before I'm ready to fuck. I finger my mom's clit easily bringing her to multiple orgasms. I can last longer since I had jacked off, so I start pounding my mom's pussy. She will have several more orgasms before I blow my load inside of her. All this takes less than an hour so we do it more than a few times a day.

Usta!

Please write more soon!

Generally a good story. I think having "F" cups is overdone; especially on such a short woman. B & C cups would be optimal on her. Also, wishing she were younger so she could baby bump.

I'm an incest lover, specially Mom/Son intimacy. I love detailed seduction and long foreplay. Please go in to pussy and anal play too.