All Comments on 'My Sexy Poltergeist'

by JadeSteed

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winterplayingwinterplayingover 1 year ago

So I just discovered you today. I absolutely love your writing. I love the way you describe the details which helps me to feel like I am there and could experience the scene more intimately. I'm probably butchering this as I am not a writer. However I appreciate good writing/style/plot. This was just so well done. Bravo. (the end felt just a smidgeon rushed)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very well done. Good plot, dialog, and character development. The sex was excellent. 5-stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. Actually I’ve always hated “breeder” type stories and usually try to avoid them but thankfully this one seems to be an exception to the rule. Well written too.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

TheBoredandtheTemptedTheBoredandtheTempted24 days ago

Loved this, romantic and sexy ghost with a task to finish before moving on. Keep up the writing you are fantastic at it.

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I'm a professional writer, this is a great place to blow steam when I can't publish it under my own name.