All Comments on 'My Sexy Woman'

by Rayy69ruizz

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Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 8 years ago
I like it.

More please.

Rayy69ruizzRayy69ruizzover 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Yea working on one as we speak

bobscnjbobscnjover 8 years ago
I do like it

Been with a couple of Shemales over the years and totally enjoyed the experiences. Please write more. Looking forward to reading what she is going to teach him.

mrstanleymrstanleyover 8 years ago
Hot story sounds real?

Very good job for your first story. I am a writer on the site as well. I really enjoyed your story. I think it is time for a part 2.

Rayy69ruizzRayy69ruizzover 8 years agoAuthor
Bobscnj

Hey thanks for the comment and yea I'm working on the 2. Part

Rayy69ruizzRayy69ruizzover 8 years agoAuthor
Mrstanley

Thanks for your feed back

And yea it's very true it's a story about me

I'll be posting the second part soon

Dark_StormDark_Stormover 8 years ago
Hot story, but needs work.

I enjoyed the story, but your writing needs work. You kept switching back and forth from past tense to present tense, sometimes within the same sentence. It's best to stick with past tense throughout. I hope you'll correct this in any future chapters. I look forward to reading them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome

I just found this site looking for trans erotica and your story is exactly what I had in mind. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Will there be a part 2?

Please please please continue on with this story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Confused.

So this "woman" is actually a man and you are a gay man who likes camp men, sorted!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Damn!

Too Short!

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