All Comments on 'My Sissy Sex Toy Fantasy Pt. 01'

Your story is the kind I may have enjoyed, but though I could mostly ignore the bad spelling, your complete lack of understanding of how to write dialogue was simply too much to tolerate.

I reached just about halfway through and had to give up. If you don't want to spend a little time learning how to write properly then educated people will always find your stories frustrating to read.

Really like direction and ideas explored :) the kinks are right up my alley!

I think though maybe go a bit slower with the story it felt very quick at times.

Don't be discouraged though :3 I really enjoyed it and can't wait for another!

Xxx

It's been a long time since I don't read such a good sissy story.