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And then my pleasure peaked. I was coming, pumping jet after jet of sperm into my beautiful sister, marking her as mine forever. A feeling of love surged through me. This was what I wanted. I wanted Susanna and only Susanna. It was wonderful to be with her in every way.
As I slowed, Susanna looked up at me with a smile of pure joy. She reached up and ran her fingers through my hair. "I love you, My Knight."
"And I love you, My Princess."
AND THEY ALL LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER
Author's Notes:
* A huge thanks to those who contributed to this story: MaximusTheMad, MDR1986, OhDave1, Fuzzy_Kbear, middleson, Old Uncle Al, Wolf, Katie, and TM
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- COMMENTS
Anonymous18 days agoit was fun reading it though extensive, thing i missed most is your way of hugging touching and snuggling like your 1952 bowling mum, still 5/5
Enochlesis22 days agoAs always, love your stories. I'm not sure if it was intentional, but I thought it was neat how you created a parallel between two people whose lives have been governed by things humans made up on their own: religion and economics.
Comentarista8229 days agoI'm glad that I stumbled across this gem, and I so enjoyed reading it! I can't say that the entire premise is incredibly original, but I'm not docking you for it either because at this site there's probably one author that has probably written one story similar to this.. so they can kind of run together. And now the fact you present the mom as the tyrant kind of flips the I guess normal story expectation on its head? It really creates the angst necessary to lead to this relationship, and if certainly you were trying to make the mother to be a totally unsympathetic character, you most definitely succeeded!
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I appreciate the idea of her kind of being hidden away although I don't refer to the mom artificially restraining her; I love her wits in determining how to escape, and what proves a shade more unique is you later reveal-- toward the end of the story - - that that she deliberately acted drunker than she was in hopes he would take advantage of her! You truly succeeded at the slow burn without it being too slow, and by the time they both decide to fully go all in with their relationship, you've removed the obstacles without getting them out of the way to artificially. You certainly crafted a story easy to read that most definitely insured good grammar abounded, and I especially enjoyed how you integrated real life tips- via the story - that for two people to have a true relationship and connection that they must be willing to both truly listen to each other, their ideas, discuss things, and then arrive at a better-informed decision. I just really love that interaction, and it's something I don't remember happening off many stories that I typically read here.
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It's not to say this is a perfect story, but it is perfectly charming, and most definitely deserves the 5 stars I rated it.
