All Comments on 'My Sister Anna Gives Me Her All'

My 2 cents

A very good story. 5/5 stars. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

Sick bastard, eating his own cum. ruined whatever this might have been.

Not bad at all, you did miss a few words in your sentences. I know from my own writings that happens. If possible, can you start using a proofreader. I hope you add on to this story maybe two more parts. It has a lot of possible outcomes. Brother and sister relationships are true life happenings I know for sure. I had a long-lasting relationship with my stepsister " she was like a real sister " we were put together very young I was 3 yrs. old she was 1 yr. old. Our relations lasted 13 yrs. and even in our 60's we are great friends and family. We had lived together as man and wife we never made babies to this day I don't know how we didn't. Never used condoms or birth control. We just fucked, made love, and screwed all the time just that look at each other and we both got naked or undressed each other without a single word. Oh well enough about us that's a whole other story. A reader in Florida

A nice slow build up and a satisfactory conclusion. A little bit more care with editing and correcting would have made it a perfect 5.

I loved it!!....Please write more about these two.

This was a nice short story with just enough story to feel plausible. An editor would definitely benefit this story. Also I'll note it's a little short for my personal taste, but that's not a bad thing. Good job! 4/5