All Comments on 'My Sister Blows Me in My Tent Ch. 02'
by kevinnash
- 15 Comments
Anonymousabout 2 years agoLiv from the first chapter has become Liz in the second. A bit annoying but still a great story!
ShortyMacabout 2 years agoI’ve wanted to fuck my older (+11years) from the time I was13 when I saw her topless. Damn she had to 38DD and even after 2 kids still firm.
collin4xxxabout 2 years agoLove to see this story continue…. Personally, I’d love for them to continue, and perhaps draw the other girl into their circle. She would provide the perfect cover, by dating the brother, while all three were intimate. I’d also love to hear about sister becoming pregnant, first her first unprotected fuck, and their continued relationship. And perhaps Liz also becoming pregnant from her unplanned union with the siblings. I can’t think of anything hotter than a triad with a girlfriend and his sister, other than getting both of them pregnant. But I do have a thing for pregnant women…
OldUncleAlabout 2 years agoDon’t you just love the people who come here, afraid to use their name, but don’t hesitate to tell YOU how to write. If the story goes fast it’s because the writer wants it to! He still has this other not too good looking gal to do something with.
And who says brother/ sister never share?! My sister introduced me to a couple of her friends and they added a lot to our fun. my sister was/ is a brunette with small breasts and she had a blonde friend who was pretty good up to for as young as she was at the time. None of us were 18 so you won’t be hearing about it here. And her other buddy was almost pencil thin, but she lovedto suck dick, so she was always welcome. lol
Good story, you write it how you want and. or how it happened, whichever is correct.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoGood premise continues.
But sex continues to be super fast.
Needs to slow down. Needs more details. Certainly the short description of him eating her pussy needs more details. Many more details. Step by step.
It seems as if there's a race on to get to the end of the story.
Three stars.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoStill a good premise.
But too rushed.
What was the rush to pull down her shorts and latch his mouth onto her pussy? Why not some admiring it. Touching it. Exploring it. Getting her so hot she would ask/demand that he use his mouth.
What was the rush to fuck after he ate her out? Why not some enjoyment of the afterglow? Then, noticing how hard his cock was after her orgasm, some playing with his cock for a while? With her enjoying handling it. And enjoying his reaction/s to how she handled it.
Too much could have happened that didn't.
Three stars.
Anonymous9 months ago5 Stars. Nice story, somewhat predictable though. I especially like that your stories seem to be 'one pagers' it allows me to read more of your works.
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