All Comments on 'My Sister Blows Me in My Tent Ch. 11'

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Anonymousabout 2 years ago

Your story is good but way to short per page. You build up is okay but you leave the story hang at the end. You need to write more pages.

bshell47 almost 2 years ago

I think Liz should have let her brother share.

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