All Comments on 'My Sister, Her Best Friend, and me'

This is a really hot story, very well written. Just about every guy's dream. It will never happen to me but nice to dream about it.

Seems Matt has got a jerry can of semen somewhere. Nearly a gallon of goo ...

Absolutely exaggerated and lack of plausibility which makes it only 3 stars instead 5.

Otherwise: nice plot.

Needs a part 2 that fills out the story

Cliche after cliche after cliche

Boring.

Amazing.

Good premise.

But each sex act/scene is much too fast. And they continue like a run on sentence.

Neede much more dialog about what was being done to/by them.

Needed much more foreplay/preliminaries before speeding ahead.

The girls presumably hadn't much actual experience with things sexual -- at least involving cocks -- or so it would seem, and there needed to be more slow exploration by and to them.

And what guy ever thinks of his cock as a "member"? None.

Got too repetitious. Gave up before the end.

Four stars, nevertheless.

"Cliché after cliché after cliché

Boring."

I'll second that, cookie cutter story from yet another writer who doesn't know that only about 5% of a cumshot is from his balls.

Man I'm so tired of stories that are going good till it''s ruined by the woman answering the door naked to a delivery guy ( it's always a guy).2/5

Cliches are there for a reason. Fiction is supposed to be a little bit unrealistic.

I thought it was perfect. At one point I wondered that birth control never came up, but as I said, it’s fiction.

5*

Tc

without anal would have been 5.

Chiche cliche… etc.. he’s right.

This is boring.

We’re is the “original” story section, the one that actually gets into story development and which I become emotionally invested in the characters? There are so few and trying to find good ones is exhausting!

Some of the dialogue was stupid and nauseating but GREAT story!

Are you sure, that this is not a "story book" for a Gonzo movie? After the first half page I was just flying over the rest to see, if there was something different than boring sex. Didn't find anything. So 3/5 is nearly too much.

People new to sex wouldn't be having anal... and suntan lotion tastes awful. 3 1/2 stars for story, but I gotta deduct for the weirdness that never happened and the mentioned yucks.

Sinsational...The love n emotions were genuine n creative.Would have been more interesting if Debbie would've had a brother to join in the fun?