All Comments on 'My Sister's Boyfriend'

Give Jake a bit of the dirty blond hair spread across that sexy manly chest!

You need to get better at writing these stories.

Nice and realistic, plus hot!

"I am on birth control"

"I am going to come"

Seems too clunky and unrealistic, use "I'm" instead.

Another chapter would be amazing please!!

"Only seven inches" did she whip out the ruler she remembered instead of her swimsuit? Terrible.

"Only seven inches"? It's one thing to fetishise large penises, it's another to act like seven inches is small. Have you ever seen a dick before?

Mmmm. Mmmhh. Mmmmhhhhhhh. It stinks