All Comments on 'My Sister's Boyfriend'

Mmmm. Mmmhh. Mmmmhhhhhhh. It stinks

"Only seven inches"? It's one thing to fetishise large penises, it's another to act like seven inches is small. Have you ever seen a dick before?

"Only seven inches" did she whip out the ruler she remembered instead of her swimsuit? Terrible.

Another chapter would be amazing please!!

"I am on birth control"

"I am going to come"

Seems too clunky and unrealistic, use "I'm" instead.

Nice and realistic, plus hot!

You need to get better at writing these stories.

Give Jake a bit of the dirty blond hair spread across that sexy manly chest!