by tlanuwa1963
James is like most rich kids a spoiled brat. He got upset his father was having sex with Barbara even though he sleeps with all the slave women. Sorry if I was his dad it would have been time for the kid to go to the military academy and learn how to be a man. The fact his mother gave Barbara to him as a personal assistant shows basically how he got so spoiled. Sorry didn't like James at all but did like the dad. Too bad the story wasn't about the father it would have been more interesting and you might have gotten from five stars instead of one.
Admittedly I was reluctant to start this because of the perceived plot line. But the way you have presented the characters and plot, I am now a huge fan. The respect you have written into James’s character is outstanding. You show that respect to another is necessary in human life no matter who or what you are. Congratulations on one the best stories I’ve read on literotica
Can't wait for James to start training Katherine. But first We need a peek at how bratty the sister is.
You stated in your comments in the beginning of this “episode” that you needed to work on your pacing. I must wholeheartedly disagree. You’re definitely not creating quickie stroke stories, there’s seemingly an actual thought out and long range plot being unfolded. These have been very well written. The only bit of clarification I’d like to insert that “b-line”, as you’ve used it, is actually “beeline” as a bee’s most direct route back to the hive. Even with that, I’ve thoroughly enjoyed these stories!
I didn't know what to make of this story when I first saw the title nearly didn't read it then nearly give up half way into the first page that would have been a mistake I've really enjoyed all 8 parts good job