All Comments on 'My Sister's Keeper Pt. 01'

Killing a family with young kids is really brutal. Can't wait for Katherine to feel some guilt over that. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Can't wait for next part read all:)

Thank you.

It's finally here! Thanks, keep up the good work!

Thank you

This is a great story. I am looking forward to see how she handles the bad news.

I'm not a fan of incest stories. But leaving that aside, its a very well written story. Katherine's anger, oblivion, and shrewish temper come across very clearly. The emotions of the hospital scenes are very powerful and well handled. 5 stars

Thank you so much anon:-)

I hope Katherine starts to feel real remorse otherwise a wasted individual. Obviously she's got a great business head but so far little else.

Good start

Jane!

This alternate world of yours is trippy, and slavery just is a bad idea.

So, do you fill this alternate, immoral world with interesting characters, with emotion and eroticism?

Yes!

Glad to see Jane getting something she wants, she deserves that and more.

Literally, “FUCK THEM ALL!”