All Comments on 'My Sister's New Buzz'

So f...ing good, i hope there would be a second chapter with both sisters being together

Sonu

A really interesting start. I hope you plan on continuing the story, I'm eager to see how their relationship develops; I like the dynamic so far, the younger sister telling her older to do her laundry and Amanda doing it. I hope to see you expand on that dynamic, the younger sister Vilma being a bit entitled (maybe more than a bit) and bossing her sister around, with the older sister Amanda putting up with it, obeying her, without resisting, without resenting it even. Just a natural sub.

Would really like a part 2!

Amanda,

This was an excellent story. We all love to do naughty things occasionally, especially in secret. This story could be expanded, but remember that it is your story, from your mind. Do more with this story or not, as you please, but please write more. The orgasm I had reading your story should not be my last at your pen.

Alice

Wicked, naughty, and vividly arousing! I'll be anticipating the next phase!!

Thank you so much everyone!

For now there is no part 2, as this is a real story, but I have very much enjoyed putting it into words and sharing it with you all. If anything else were to happen, I will definitely post it here, but seeing the lovely positive reaction I've been getting, I might try writing some fiction too.

Any more feedback will be greatly appreciated xxx