by AnonyWriter
I have read all 3 chapters and given a mark of 4 atm my reason is that while its a fun read , its taking too long to get to the action , i find myself not bored as such but impatient to wait for the interesting bits to come , my suggestion is make the chapters longer so you have time to keep the reader interested , thats my opinion anyway .
Great story so far. I personally love how no one has actually had sex yet. Don't rush it. Telling the story is more important. It's like a tease, you know the good parts are coming, and they will be all the better for it.
Many mothers know about sons panty play. Often, she doesn't let on and leaves very fragrant gift in hamper for son. It is exciting and empowering to know son jerks off for her.