All Comments on 'My Sister's Skincare'

Hot af! Yeah I'm not here for realism haha

I actually loved the story. And honestly, I have done the same thing since I was 16, (now 47) and my skin is so soft and without a trace of acne. Also, swallowing helps the hair and finger nails grow and makes the hair soft.

It doesn't seem to matter what subject you write about, your work is always amazing. I'm not sure what aspect of your writing causes it to be so interesting to read, perhaps it's the fact that you don't rush right into a lurid sex scene, but instead build up the anticipation and maintain a certain amount of realism even when writing about something that's just a fantasy.

I loved it. Great fantasy. Keep up the good work.

Like it very much. Their emotions were realistic enough. It's your story so write it the way you want. I'm hoping you will continue with this.

A little fast but overall a good effort. Maybe another installment soon.

Please keep it going

@smltwnguy - basically this was a test run for me, dipping my toes in the incestuous waters. And I'll concede that it does get right to things rather quickly. My other stories I've tended to take more time building things up. Already writing chapter 2.

Unrealistically reluctant brother

Well written. Compelling story with well developed characters. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it.

Fun story. Good twist on old yearn

Cock in hand, great story haven't cum yet, going for Chapter 2

Please continue the story!!

I agree with muskyboy. Where did his anti-incest feelings come from? He's not a Boy Scout. We don't read of him going to church, or that his dad and/or mom were uptight conservatives, or his uncle molested him, or whatever. So all his protestations seem formulaic and perfunctory. So find another way to heighten the tension in the story, or provide sufficient evidence to support your character's position.

Interesting premise.

Not really erotic though. Mostly just mechanical.

Four stars.

Brilliant! The fantasy I never knew I wanted lol

Another fabulous fantasy. Fabulous!

She better break out the blowjobs as payment.

Jism cures all. What about sinuses? Get out the netty pot! Cataracts? It's probably one of the ingredients of Lume.