All Comments on 'My Slutty Little Sister Ch. 01'

I would hope he makes her dump the boyfriend

Good premise.

But the sex is too matter-of-fact. Happens too fast. No buildup. The way it's described the playing with her titties isn't foreplay.

Needs more details about each sex scene. Needs preliminaries. For example, when she's going to blow him, why doesn't she play with his cock and balls first? Find out what he likes. Dialog while doing that asking him for input on what he likes. Is this good? Do you like what I'm doing? Should I do it faster? Slower? Do you want to put it in my mouth yet? Do you like it when I lick it? Should I suck it? Harder? Slower? Faster? Should I use my hand too? Why don't you play with my tits while I'm blowing you? etc.

Four stars.

Four stars.

Now this has some nice possibilities. Hope you continue

Hope she gets rid of the boyfriend. I also hope her step brother doesn’t use her like the boyfriend is! Wish he would stick up her for!

Five Stars & FANTASTIC!

PLEASE CONTINUE!

Continue this more details tho

Back in the 70s I was that girl! And my step brother found out and I became his (and his father’s) slut, lover, slut, call girl and eventually mother to twin girls. My step father and step brother couldn’t wait to turn them into perfect cum sluts and eventually breed them. My mom, me, and my twins all have perfect 34D tits, hot cunts, and live the taste and feel of cum.

Great story...keep it going.

he had her over a barrel, he should have gone all the way with her slutty ass and should have knocked her up too, lol. he should have used her every hole. lol. why wait until the next day, lol.

I really enjoyed the story. I can't wait to see what they do next. Please continue

Crap story. 18 year old girl who's never had an orgasm? Just what planet are you on. The rest of the story is completely lacking any credibility whatsoever.

Lots of rather juvenile comments, are you guys old enough to be here? I don't think so.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

He has pics, vids, and her over a barrel and his first thought is "this is getting sent to Nick and Chad". Really? He's not keeping her for himself?

Boy is she gullible. Must be a blond.