All Comments on 'My Submissive Little Sister Ch. 01'

This is a remarkable story. not only is it written well, but it paints such a clear picture of what she experiences. I have always had a submissive fantasy, and this just makes me want to find a trustworthy man to live it out. Thank you for the beautiful story. I hope you will add to it

Bravo, author. This is by far one of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica. It held my interest and aroused me to a point where I wished it hadn't ended. Normally, I avoid any story having more than two screens, but, in this case, I would have read 200 screens if they were all like these. I read the story you posted yesterday and it was good, but, this one is better.

No! Outfuckingstanding! This was a hell of a lead in chapter! Very good but gentle submissive start! I am sure the submissiveness will get better!

The second chapter I am waiting on cannot come fast enough!

WOW!

Thanks for writing!

Please please please continue this story. I can hardly wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Definitely one of the best written stories that I've read here on Lit. I enjoyed it immensely, and will be waiting to read the next chapter.

I will just say that all those before me said it well enough. And you represented that beginning between submissive and Master very well. Bravo.

We definitely need a second chapter on this one and fast! Or I'll be re-reading this one for a long time!

as soon as you got to the submission part it died if you need to put these things in your stories then put them in the fetish area or atleast warn the reader in the tag line and at the begining of the story not everyone likes submission stories you really need to warn the readers i stopped when it was first mentioned and may not read any more of your stories i have marked you as a questionable writer

To the anonymous post beginning with "ruined"....

What part of My "SUBMISSIVE" Little Sister did you not understand??????

Great story!!! Can't wait for chap. 2.

Please continue this story. I think this is the best thing i've read on here in a while

I must let you know that this is one of the best works I have read in a long time. You manage to portray the sensitive side of BDSM

Little bit different take on the sensitive side of submissives. And not to be confused with S&M. So, this story is has a good and original theme. A bit slow for me, but some make like that. Definately need to get more sex in the next chapter.

This was a great beginning. I look forward to much more. I love cute Goth girls as well.

What a good read, I liked the way it slowly built. Look forward to future chapters

Please keep it going

This story has a great build-up - whatever genre it may be written in! It is slow , sensual. evocative and intimate in its presentation - and as a female sub i can equate with the brilliantly narrated scene... can't wait for more of the story. ThankYou - f/s UK

What a wonderfully written story. I can not wait for the next chapters. My breathing grew short with their's.

This was awesome. would love to read the next installment

I was dripping by the end of this, but I want to save my own orgasm for when she has hers with Brett's cock in her. LOL. Awesome read!

I'm so glad I finally found your story. I thought it was a wonderful start for the new submissive and her brother as her first master training her. His love for his younger sister and the desire he has to help her be the sexually complete submissive she longs to be was beautifully written. I am glad I can go directly to the next two chapters and not have to anxiously wait for them over some weeks or months.

PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY.. I AM SO WET AND I WANT MORE.

I just finished this ch, now i have to find more..... it shows exactly how i want me and my fiancee to be.... i am his submissive slave ;)

I love it. Continue on.

Reading this my second time through and wanted to comment even though it is a story, I like the way he is taking his time leading her to submissiveness slowly, it may be too slowly and she might get bored with the length of time it is taking.

Cannot wait to read more!

Are you a pro? This is a very good piece of writing.

Fantastic. Brought back memories of my little sister and the fun we had.

PLZ CONTINUE THIS

More please

I only had a brother to grow up with. He did teach me how to jack off, but that was as far as it went. Sure wish I had a sister to play with. But it is what it is so I'll just enjoy Brett and Alison doing their thing.

This is genuinely one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. Bravo.