All Comments on 'My Sweet Bella Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Wow!!

Wow!! That was an incredibly intense and hot story... while I did notice some mistakes in spelling and sentence structure, I didn’t enjoy reading it any less. I read all three chapters one after the other tonight, so I wasn’t held in suspense waiting for future chapters to be added.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Please, please write more as soon as you can!!!

Viper7792Viper7792almost 3 years ago

Read all 3 chapters so far and loved it!

More! More! More!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Where's the rest of the story

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

hmmm 8 chapters....?

...."threee years lat33333r"

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British guy with a passion for loving fantasies. I try my best to write characters that feel like they possess genuine emotion and desires for one another, despite the conflicting nature of their attraction. Writing is a lot tougher than I assumed it would be, and I doubt my...

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