by brahmi007
Why the fuck are u Hindu cucks obsessed with Muslims fucking your women?? Could never understand this shit.. does it have something to do with the Muslim rulers having lorded over you all for centuries and taken ur women at whim to convert and use in their Harems?? How pathetic can u now be .. still mentally subservient to Muslims?
BUT - it would have been better to use a "piss" or "golden shower" tag - or both, since that's a repeated feature of the story.
Urine play is a very specific fetish, and some find it to be a turn-off, much like scat play. It's better to tag it, so people don't find themselves put off by it in what would otherwise be a pretty good story.
Just a constructive suggestion. Short form: tag your kinks.
Don't switch categories mid-story. Put this garbage in FETISH where it belongs. And try to get a better storyline. This was simply ludicrous.
1 star