by Dreamweaver32
Great story with the twisted brother and plot kept us reading as if it were Tin Tin cum of age! However, a bit too violent for our taste --hot wax on the clit??? OUCH (evil grin.)
We will continue with your next story, and hope to be kept on the edge of our seats again.
R & L
the cunt bitch wannabe dominatrix ends up with a slathering pussy when it gets its comeuppance,absolutely perfect! when the tables got turned i was howling with laughter!!! hope you continue and dont leave the blankshooting goof out of some special misery.
Normally I detest BDSM, but to see that bitch get hers was just too sweet. Great story. Looking forward to the next entry.
AWESOME STORY!!!! I loved every bit of it and I liked the ending even more. You have to give me some tips on being a good author. Plzzzz I'm begging. If you want contact me.
You wrote a very sexy story with an excellent plot. Even the subtle stuff was great. One example was the way you had Madge described by her nephew. Although she was obviously very attractive he seemed to describe her so reluctantly, begrudgingly describing her blonde hair and shapely legs. Well done.
Great story. While im not much into the whole slave/master thing, revenge is really a thing i can get behind. I couldnt stop laughing maniacally at the end when he suggested she was going to be the "Entertainment".
Great story . Please do a second part, . I have just gotten into being a Master, it amazes me what they are willing to take and do, yet cum and cum again....Great story
I have a close relationship with my aunt. It began when I was a teenager. This story actually reminded me of the two of us. Thanks for helping me recall some erotic moments from my past. I learned a lot from her. She consoled me during several high school and college breakups with girls that I was ill-suited for.
I admit this story blew my mind but I loved every word of it well told and written
Can't wait to read chapter 2