All Comments on 'My Tall She-Male Pt. 01'

Needs an editor

But hot

I gave you 5 stars to encourage you

Pretty good but she's half way done with her surgery? I feel like english isn't your first language.

The writing, detail and buildup were a little rough but did not take too much away from the story that you were trying to tell.

Try a little bit harder, pay closer attention to editing and I think you will soon be putting out 5 star stories.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Wow, erotic...from a bi virgin

This story was about perfect.

NOW.... we need chapter 2 and the party.