by Tdisk
This again was some of your outstanding writing and storytelling. Please please continue I can see lots more chapters and a long wonderful storyline for these two lovers. So so so many directions you can take this couple. Please make it a long fun story. Cheers.
I really enjoyed the set up, and I hope you continue. I’d like to see him struggle with being submissive, and see what tricks Sunny has to assert her dominance. I like femdom that has a strong loving relationship behind it, and I think this sets up a story in that vein, if you choose to go there. Happy writing
Felt a bit... clinical to me. A void of emotion. He is breast-obsessed and she just goes along. Want to read more, but seemed a bit dragging. Good luck.