All Comments on 'My Teacher Ms. Miller Ch. 01'
by edstevens94301
- 15 Comments
Anonymousover 11 years agoDon‘t listen to that guy, your story was awesome and really diferent from other teacher-student stories in a good way! Would really wan't to read what happens next!
Anonymousover 11 years agoIt was a damn good story, and I can tell you've got talent. Whether you continue the story of Tony & Ms Miller or move on to something else, just keep on writing!
BFBradleyabout 11 years agoHot damn, that was intensely hot and well done. Did feel like a jump to orally pleasing him. But it reasoned well, and I do hope you have the creative spark to continue on.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoImpossible premise. Try again when you have an idea that is at least remotely plausible.
Anonymousover 10 years agoIgnore them. They either don't have accounts on here and don't write, or are too afraid to reveal who they really are. You're not a bad writer, but you could use a little practice. As far as an impossible premise, ignore that; some people forget that this web site is about fiction and a lot of these stories are fantasies. Sometimes they're personal fantasies. Keep writing; practice makes perfect.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI am shadowstalkerinfinte and I loved your story.literotica did not activate my account and I lost the username. There is no one in the world who has not seen a teacher in or out of school who has not fantasized about doing them or the teqcher doing the fantasizer. Also the pemie was actually plausible becasue if you read page one it said she might have heard Tony speak and wanted to pay him back, so to speak. Keep writting and remeber I am always watching you from the shadows.
Dougntexasabout 10 years agoGreat Job. I love this story. Please write more. Thanks so much.
Doug
magic10fingers4almost 9 years agoWhat an interesting beginning - so much can happen - certainly glad you decided to write!
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