All Comments on 'My Teacher, My Love.'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
a bit confusing

i understood the fantasy but it went wrong somewhere....i think it should have been written as a romance between her mother and the teacher...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
re:a bit confusing

It doesn't help that it's rather poorly written, e.g., switching from 1st person to 3rd, the judge's monologue punctuated as if it was narrative (i.e., no open quotes), etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
TOTAL FUCK UP

in any education authority he would have been kicked out of teaching and arrested and charged with having sex with a student.minor.....happens all too often and have seen people destroyed by fucking students...make or female so to write this load of crap is just asking for trouble....much better to have made it a story about a mother and the teacher....far more acceptable in society than illegal trash like this...could have an affair after she had left school ...say two years....but never ever while still a student....just not accepted....even if they marry...the teacher would still have been charged and kicked out of teaching...

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I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...