All Comments on 'My Telija Ch. 01'

i love it so far....would love to hear more

can't wait for more. :o)

Oh I just love this! Funny, sweet, the drama... *hehe* sexual tension all over the place... Wow, what a story that's unfolding here!

Like the title btw! ;)

I will be happy. I love this story so far. Hot fairies, danger, and nonhuman mating. Don't be slow posting chapters, please.

So amazing so far!

Please post the next chapter soon. Absolutely love this story!

oh god this is gonna be good can't wait

LOOOOVE IT!!!!!!! Update soon.

Just kidding. :) I love this and, like everyone else, cannot wait for more. I love your style. I wasn't sure that I would like you switching the point of view in this story but it added so much. I like that the characters seem real.....umm..at least as real as Fae can get. I love that Jordan's reaction is what most people would feel if they were suddenly thrust into that world. He didn't just accept it and say, "Well, hey that's got to be real." He thought he was crazy and is angry.

Keep up the amazing work! :)

I cannot wait to see what will happen next.

This is off to a great start...I can't wait for more.

more please, I love it!

So my first thought was...how dare you not be writing Dan's story! lol But, you pulled me in with your talented way with words and the worlds you create and I'm just as into this story as I was into Cade and Micah's. One of your strengths is the way you naturally make it feel real with things like Vendish's lyrical way of speaking. Of course we have the gorgeous world of the fae you created of which I've only seen a spot in a field and still think it sounds beautiful :) I love the story spun about Jameen (name is appropriate...how mean to leave Jordan's mom..some ghea! :), and the dragons, etc. I hope you explain more of who Vendish was to Jameen and how he was able to be named prince. Why wouldn't Jameen come back when his evil wife was dead? Look forward to more...but you better still be working on the other story *shaking finger at you* :)

I agree I was hoping for a continuation too but this is so cute and funny... more please

Loved Cades story but this is soooooo much better. I love fae stories!!! Your extreeemly talented & I loved the humour in this piece, Cade was a bit on the serious side

Lucy as a Fae. Well played.

I am loving this story so far Night. Great work. I'm excited to read the next chapter.

xoxo.

C.

I just love this story. Can't wait to read more...

There was a man once said,"i will not speak".so who am i to speak.this i cannot describe.

Incredible world building!

Poor Jordan..... I think Daega is a trixter and might do something to poor Jordan....

That wind fairy is a bit of an a$$