by PoisonousPineapple
Composition skills are quite good, the dialogue and narrative flowing naturally from one stage to another.
The plotline is without a doubt one of the wierder explorations of "monster fucking" I've ever encountered, leaving the ultimate outcome of the MC's varied copulations to our imagination--or a succeeding chapter?
I can't say I found much erotic after the MC's encounter with the ghost, but that reflects more on my own sexual triggers than upon the "monster sex" genre.
Keep writing.
MLJ
Fuck no, the spider is where I draw the line. The ghost was definitely my favorite, it’s such a hot kink.
I'd agree with the other commenters, you really should continue with this story line.
This is my first ever comment on this site.
I really enjoyed your story, please will you continue it with further monsters. I really like the ones where her arms are tied and her legs spread wide apart so she has to take the enormous cocks in her pussy and ass.
Thanks Angelique xx