All Comments on 'My Valerie Fantasy'

Really want to read Part 2

Agree/ I would really like for you to continue.

Love your writing. You are a great story teller. Can't wait for more.

This is the first story I've read by this author....wow! The accurate and very sexy description made this an amazing read, as well as the perfect material to a shuddering orgasm ;) please carry on posting, I will be a frequent reader of your work :)

Beautifully written, incredibly hot!

I've now read evey story by this author and they are all fantastic, please, please write more. I simply can't wait

brilliant story ;love it now i to want more and more of my Valerie fantasy .

out standing writing go for beth let Valerie open you up to a real big Orgasm with her having one too. Mmmmmmmmmmm love it.

Your stories have given me several earth shattering orgasms on each read.

i am typing this with one hand as the other is on my clit and rubbing fast.

Thank you and please Cum again. i would love to read some more

One of the best stories I have read. Really convincing and makes me thing "Valerie" is a real person. Hope you post part II sometime soon. Wonderful work.

This is such a wonderful story and defines what is meant by erotic. It is often the imagined or wished for meaning behind everyday situations that are the most emotionally exciting. This is such a story and the yearning and emotional confusion pours through every line. Brilliant!

It has been over two years but I still check to see if there is a 2nd chapter. Please upload it if there is one or leave a note saying there will not be one. Just like the protagonist in this superb story, we have been left in an agony of anticipation.

I like reading the comment section cause it often lead me to wonderful stories like this, that I would otherwise not know about. I am so pleased with this story that I can't wait to read a follow up. YoungBeth, you're on to something and I hope you continue writing. All the best.