All Comments on 'My Virgin Nephew'

That was an EPIC...one of the best stories I have EVER read on this site. Nice to see someone right a very long story and submit it en masse. Personally I submit mine piece meal. You must be a very patient writer. And VERY talented. Many thanks.

Yes I have read it back and I have written right not write...the hot story distracted me....

I think this story should warrant a 6 let alone a 5!

WOW........Fantastic story. Left me hard, dripping and wanting more. Write on!!

Sam,

I have been sneaking away from the real world to ead this a bit a atime all weekend! I love it! SO DAMN HOT! Great character development. Nice plot twists. Incedible (multi-orgasmic) sex scenes! All I can say is WOW!

...of that 1940's Abbott & Costello skit, "Who's on First?" Only this time, the answer is, "Who cares!".

From the stuttering nephew at the beginning who was either a mental retard being taken advantage of in pedophilia to the howling OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH at the end, this author must have been reading a completely different story compared to the feedback of the groupies posting here.

Would like to read the wonderful story as it is not here.

Great Plot, great twists, great character detail, and great sex... Normally I'd say write more, but I think this story sits well right where you ended it. WOW, heck with it... write more!!!

I enjoy stories with a twist towards the end that shows that everything isn't as it seemed. Nice, hot sex scenes but different enough to be enjoyable just for the non-sexual scenes. I'll have to go back and reread it again - knowing the ending. I'm sure I'll enjoy it from a different point of view - knowing ahead of time what the Aunt doesn't know.

... Story continues. Both threesomes, more with Jenny & Jeremy, Sara & Jeremy, etc.

was a setup as soon as Jenny started pushing it, but it got better as it went along. I wouldn't mind if there was a sequel.

story i have had the pleaure of reading on here in a long time , as already stated by others grate story line from beginning to end ,please write a sequel to this as we must know who did wot to who ect ect lol well done sam is all i can say and thankyou . p/s to the one person who left the negative comments on this story if you have not the balls to leave your name , why bother critisizing other peoples work

You continue to be one of the best authors on this site. Please keep this series going!

I loved the story... right up until the point where she discovered she'd been lied to and manipulated for the entire time. That twist made me skip everything else, only skimming it to see if the husband was in on it. Seduction is one thing, but deceit on that level is a player's game, not something within a family.

its a 10/10 rating story.

please write a sequel of this with including more elder woman in family

I didn't like the part about how Sarah was lied to the whole time and the end seemed to get kind of dark and twisted. The first part of the story was great though.

I loved this story. You made it all fit so well. Even the non-erotic part was so well thought out.

Johns kinda annoying but other than that its a 10/10

its a good story well exept john i realy hate him but other than that a goot story 7.5/10

Why couldn't I have had an aunt like that?

This story brought pleasure to me i think i got my self off on each page. The only part i didn't like was near the end it start getting a little gloomy. Other than that 10/10.

The end was a disappointment,it should have continued through the planned threesome. Otherwise it was good.

AMAZiNG YET AGAiN!!! THE PL0T WAS 0RiGiNAL AND DEFFiNETLY N0T LACKiNG!!! GREAT SEX SCENES!!! REALLY H0T && SPiCY W0RK SAM!!!! EXCiLENT J0B!!!!!

Wow. I don't place too much stock into these kinds of stories, but this had proper structure, grammar and spelling, an interesting plot and gratuitous, but not quite overdone, sex scenes. Well done. 5/5.

Wasn't expecting a twist like that at the end, especially in a pure-smut story like this. Shows that you're definitely a cut above the rest, in my opinion. Good job.

Nah...this was fucking excellent. Great job.

I fell in love with Jeremy.

It's cute how he did all that for his Aunt.

I kinda didn't like the whole 'sharing John' part because...THEIR CHEATING.

Not everyone will like the idea of sharing a loved one to someone else, especially their relative.

But yes, i loved this.

Favorited, and rated 5*.

Well, I got as far as page 5 and that was enough. Does it ever feckin end ?

Much longer and I wudda needed sandwiches sending in !

Jasus ! Way too long and the plot was w-a-y too overdone.

it had a horrible ending y would you stop there

Don't understand the previous negative comments. Most readers (I think) want to read steamy sex stories. This is great horny stuff. I don't know how a guy can write from a woman's perspective so well but it works for me. I almost feel like its my vagina that's dripping and I don't have one of my own. I think I'll go read all the rest of your stories now.

This is a top quality story!! And I totally didn't see the twist coming

It was a good story not as good as my virgin sister but still good and I'm with that other guy how do u write from a women's perspective so well. I guess some people have talent

Mmmm this story made me so wet!!

Come on there's got to be more. Don't leave it hanging

You can't be serious. You are going to cut us off mid-stream? I got really wound up, my dick hard, and just the beginings of chest pain when you ended the story. It would have been so cool if Jennifer had already put wireless cameras in Sarah's apartment. Is there really no Megan at all, or is she someone else to add to the family mix. It would be better if she were just a name Jeremy used to get Sarah to help him. Is Jeremy just hot for his aunt, or is he looking for a longterm relationship with her? About a 10 year gap between a man and a woman is just about right to try to catch them both at their sexual peak, though a 20yr gap would be better. Women are very often at their very hottest at about 38 to 47, whereas men are best at about 16 to 28. Please add more adventures. I want to see how Jennifer gets caught in her own trap, thinking she is manipulating everyone. I want to see Sarah take the reins out of big sis's hands and no longer take a submisive role as little sister. Maybe on the night BEFORE his 40th birthdaty Sarah, John, and Jeremy sneak into Jennifer's bedroom. Bind her and blindfolded as they make no sound, they rape her for half the night while they film it. They show it to her during John's birthday party. Yes, a 50" flatscreen Tv for his birthday with Jennifer being bound, gagged, blindfolded, and DP'd by John and Jeremy while sister spanks and twists her nipples as a screensaver would be a great party entertainment!

It just needs to be one big orgy in the end they come together and just get on for hours then Jeremy goes on his date lol

I felt as deceived as she must have. Sorry, but why take a good premise and twist it till it is dark and crude?

It would have been a good story without the lousy ending.

There is a certain purity to the beginning of the story, but as the depth of deception begins to dawn on our protagonist, the whole thing gets pretty dirty. Goodbye nice girl, hello bad girl! This family is going to hell in a hand-basket, satiated and happily covered with cum and pussy juice!

I was loving the way it all was developing until the deception is revealed. Kinda made it feel dirty, but not in a hot way. The only way to make it all okay in the end is for you to write an actual conclusion. I think you need another chapter where everyone lays their cards on the table. Otherwise, I feel like Jenny and Jeremy are just assholes in the end.

This whole family is beyond sick! Loved it!

Without the deception element, the story was silly but sweet, John being an asshole, but a believable one. Sara, Jenny an Jeremy are flawed but caring. With the "clever" plot twist (why in ... do so many authors think clever is more important than - never mind) The complete story with the deception element left in is an argument for why Incest should remain illegal.

was good till all the deception went on should have left dad out of it and and had the mom and aunt do jr, together you make sara out to be a slut for the whole family when all she was trying to do is help her sister and nephew out hope you make a part 2 cumming to make things better

I gave it five stars, but Richbw is right. It was great until you made Sarah out to be a slut and a manipulated sex toy for the entire family. You didn't even really let Jenny seduce Sarah. You let Jenny get Sarah drunk with more Alchahol than she's used to, show her a homemade porn flick and sort of take advantage of her while she's drunk, horney, and a little confused. The whole thing was a setup. You couldn't just let mom be fucking her son and find out Jeremy's love for Sarah and then just get mom to help Jeremy to seduce her. You turned it into a cheap trap. Like sneaking up to someone's bathroom window at night with a video camera and taking videos of them showering. Its creepy and cheap. Every bit of this is really good until the last section. And you really 'screwed the pooch' at the end.

Clearly you were setting up some kind of full-family involvement by mentioning Jenny's unnatural interest in Jeremy's sex life and the earlier brother in-law incident when Sara was sitting for Jeremy. Still, it seemed like you tossed in too many elements and creepy ones too just to bring an 11-page story to a non-conclusion.

That's right. The story just stops midstream instead of getting a real conclusion. It seems like another case of trying to fit as many story tags into one submission as possible: family taboo; virgin/first time; lesbian; oral; big tits; big dicks; anal play; threesome; mother&son; aunt&nephew; sister-sister; spanking; voyeurism; slut-toy shaming; squirting and probably a few I've forgotten. The beginning was very very sweet between Jeremy and Sara. Most of what came after their early trysts only degraded the story into creepiness.

Secretly taped videos, spankings, slut-toy entrapment and overall deceptive manipulation all ruined a sexy little story. Just the opening "tutoring" setup was enough of a twist. That part alone was worth four or four and a half stars. I generously gave it a three as it went off the rails so badly.

loved the story I would want to see a nice sequel to it since this feels unfinished I kinda want to see the nephew end up with the aunt since he seems to care about her genuinely while his father only sees her as a sexual release for himself as evidenced when he blew up on her it showed that he wont accept her and only really let it go after the wife smoothed things over with him by taking the blame herself and because he loves her for real he could forgive her actions and also forgive the aunt along with her the aunt feels like she is smart enough to realize such and probably will sooner or later either way looking forward to more of your work it is what brought me to this site

I really want her to just do the threesome get over her infatuation with John and end up with Jeremy I know there probably won't be a part two but one can dream......

All I can say is, wow. I have never been more disgusted and turned on at the same time as when I read this story. Bravo! Five stars plus! My pussy tingles on.

What a loving sexual family. Wish I was invited. 5 wish I could give a 100

FIVE STARS - NEED ANOTHER CHAPTER TO SHOW THE ENTIRE FAMILY IN ONE MASS INCESTUOUS ACTION PACKED FUCK SESSIONS

I really Like this story, and you had me most of the time. You only lost me when....well whenever John came in the picture really. At first it was fine. I was like ok a little infatuation, but everything will go fine and she'll end up with Jeremy. but every time it got good John just popped back in to kill it. If there's ever a sequel I really really reeeaaaallly really hope you end the dumb thing with John and advance on her and Jeremy..... or atleast down play John so hes not such a large portion of it.

Sincerely, A BIG fan :)

...Just fu*~ing Great... Got numerous hard ons through out the story and to take care of them..and plans to be shared.

Wanting more....!

I was hard all the time just by reading this.

Great description of sex and characters. Thank you.

WelL, that was CLIFF HANGER!

Great stuff! A little bit complicated, but good.

But if I were her, I'd DEFINITELY arrange to get her sister's ass tanned something fierce for deceiving her...

Or should I say Raw! Good job. You have a rare and real talent for timing and erotic writing. Keep it up!

I started out liking... no loving it up the mom aunt scene. After that I just hated it. Too much. It was perfect up until that point. But that's just my opinion

No words can explain the deviousness of your insperation.

Well done.

Keep it up, as the saying goes.

Where in the hell did the sound "Aaarrrrrgggghhhhhh!" come from when the brother in law started nibbling on the wife's sisters pussy on the first page. NO ONE MAKE THAT SOUND DOING ANYTHING SEXUAL!!! or at any other time that I know of.

The old guy

I was doing all right with this story until the kid got to playing with his aunt's ass hole with his tongue while she was teaching him. What a way to ruin a perfectly good story. Should have posted this thing under ANAL rather than incest taboo.

I loved your story was really getting excited about it i got so horny i masturbated three times reading your story i have the same fantacies as you all do. Hope you continue this story i would love to hear from you about this story email me joelholt123@gmail.com

Damn it.. this is the second time I reply with the same tile; waiting, please don't publish incomplete plots, it's hard,, and now I'm hanging waiting on u to finish this one aling with ( The Sleepover ), and that makes me wonder if I want to risk starting a new story as I'm afraid I'll end up WAITING again.

Good work, kindly finish them soon

loved it but finish it are they going to have a three way and what really happened with Megan?

Too many plots. This would have been a great story if it was just the aunt teaching the virgin nephew. The brother-in-law was needless repetition. The sisters would be a good story itself. Less is better! Remember that.

I liked the beginning of story very much but every part with the father John I disliked so the end was just a disappointment for me. Was more about a slut aunt than the virgin nephew... All twists are good but every part with John ruined it for me.

You could explore this further at the truth is revealed

This ending is panse, the story was great, then the twist and lies ect ... it didnt need it.

As for the ending, it feels as if you just rushed it to end the story !!

Very disappointed, only 4* brcause of bad ending !!

The writing was good but the plotting was poor. Deception is never ever accepted by the deceived they always feel used so that lacked conviction. Jeremy is revealed as having the asshole qualities of his father - by screwing his mother behind his aunts back. Jenny's manipulation was obvious from chapter5 and Johns part was probably superfluous.And WTF about Meghan. I didn't star it, the writing quality was sound but the basic structure deeply flawed.

i loved the story as I had sex with my 38 year old Aunt when I was 18 she taught me many things , I lived with her and uncle for 4 years as I worked for uncle , we fucked wen ever we wee alone she had 4 kids but her pussy was still tight , she loved my 9 inch cock very much Jethro Clampet

Great story oh so very very hot. I will say that I figured out way early that the mom was setting he up but the sex had me hard all through it. Great job.

I Liked the Story but The Ending Killed it for Me .... In My Opinion You SHould have had a Different Ending ..

Or maybe a part 2. I think the Aunt should have been more upset. I like her Idea of the two guys and her but I don't know how to make it convincing. Aunt can blackmail the mom and nephew easy enough. But, how to get dad to do it? Mom is seriously depraved. It could be kinda cool to see the 4 of them end up as 2 couples that share though.

Despite the very mind ending, which fortells a much more complete ending Chapter, this story was far more satisfying than I had expected. I thought it was going to be about a nephew getting to do his young Aunt, but of course it turned out to be very much more, with the Aunt getting addicted to fucking the nephew for the indefinite future, while renewing her relationship with hew sister's handsome husband, and then experiencing a very positive sexual affair with her (scheming) sister. Great story, Thanx for the read, and I hope for many more stories to come.

I really loved this story. Maybe the best aunt/nephew story out there. Only the ending is missing (or at least it feels like that). A part 2, maybe even a bit shorter than this one, with Sara confronting Jenny and Jeremy and the forshadowed threesomes would be great! I know this story is over 10 years old, but it would really be appreciated. Other than that, a great one!

I quit reading the exact moment you brought John back on the scene. I didn't like how she was using her nephew as a surrogate for his father, but I was hoping she would forget him, and fall in love with her nephew. Then you went and ruined the whole story by bringing John back into her bed, just as things were getting good with Jeremy.

I won't finish this. 2 stars for the effort.

Though the storyline itself was good, the ending was shit.🤬🤬🤬 You left it hanging. There’s so much more to this story, what happened you get writer block or something I cant believe you left it like this...it was a ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ —- ⭐️⭐️= ⭐️⭐️⭐️

It’s a good story with more twists and turns than a bowl of spaghetti. I really hope you write the story of his 40th birthday.

Story is a good one but so much nonessential stuff takes up space. Seems like because of that the ending gets rushed is not very good end. The story is named my virgin nephew but ends without him.

This is less an incest/taboo story and more a preparation for an orgy

Good, but the end was rushed. Where is part Two?

PERCENTILE CANNOT BE MORE THAN 99.9 TH, GENIUS

BUT GREAT STORY

This was great, but it deserves to get a part 2 to tie up lose ends.

This at points was 4* or 5* but the ending was rushed and lacked the talent shown earlier.

I will re-read but I got the impression that the girlfriend was real but then she wasn’t??

Well done on the first few chapters

I love this story! I like your style of writing with story and character development and the continual sex! I'd love to read 2 more chapters. One chapter with the 2 threesomes of Jenny, John and Sara; the second threesome of Jenny, Jeremy and Sara. The second chapter with the threesome of Jeremy, John, and Sara; a foursome of all of them.

This story had so much going for it. The name of the story was My Virgin Nephew. Yes we had that but the main story was Sara fucking her brother in law and lusting after sharing him with sis. The ending was terrible if she had found all these things out there needed to be more story, another chapter at least. That they all end up sharing each other is cool. BUT does dad know about mom and son fucking? WIth his reaction to Sara giving the son a BJ I would think that there may well be a huge fight about that. The characters are not realistic and very shallow. You can write much better than this. But thank you for sharing your story

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

Dam was hoping to read the ending with them all together but guess not.

Fantastic!

(12/8/2022) It’s very rare for me to bail on a story. But I just couldn’t finish this. While I do enjoy some drama and sometimes some shock and awe. There must be some redeeming value in the end for me. You see I’m a romantic at heart and I was expecting a romantic or at least a semi-romantic relationship between the nephew and the aunt. I did not expect a selfish cheating dad, a depraved mother, and a submissive Aunt. All using a naive adult virgin. I jumped to the comments after Jeremy called Sarah after his date. Jenny’s character turned into a real creeper when she molested her sister, IMO. Yes, molested. I also don’t rate stories I don’t finish but I had to make an exception here because I was so put off by what had seemed to me the beginning of a great story. One star!

@mrdata9770

Totally agreed

Great story, but it needs a final chapter to tie the provocative loose ends together.

Ended to soon!

It is a good story but I wasted a lot of time on it due to it having no final ending. That always turns me off.

Really, fun story, very hot and with the terrifically twisted ending, but I would have become suspicious when the so-called girlfriends mother sent her to bed at 18 years old after 10 minutes with her boyfriend, either should give them their time or she wouldn’t let him in the house alone with her, and at 18 that’s quite unbelievable.

Mostly, I loved it, and gave five stars

I failed to mention my disappointment at not having a final chapter or 2 to tie up loose ends, although I suppose it would go on and on. Sara pretty much sums up what was going to happen next.

I have to mention, that having this twist at the end stops, the whole purpose of the story. If Jason has no starter is highly intelligent, has a big cock it’s fairly good looking he would have lost his virginity years ago, certainly wouldn’t need tutoring and if dead, mother was there to help him get a girlfriend, as for wanting his aren’t fair enough, but still would’ve lost his virginity before that. So twist kills original plot.

I still enjoyed the story, but don’t like to withhold belief on basically lazy writing.🧐