All Comments on 'My Week with Alice: Day 1'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
??

This is listed under romance? A good fuck story for sure, but don't see any romance so far. Thanks for your time and efforts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ghastly

Absolute drivel in terms of storytelling and rhetoric used to describe Alice. Lines like "She's a little thicker than I was given perception to, but with girls being as self-conscious as they are, it's understandable for her to have used trick angles in any picture she sent me." are abhorrent and have literally no benefit to the story. Nobody is using trick angles playboy, and to what point is this even stated? The guy likes her either way so why even bother adding this. This reads like some garish neckbeard fantasy. Absolutely repulsive. Particularly the line about the ticketer at the airport. My disbelief was not once suspended.

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