All Comments on 'My Wife'

Hi. As one writer to another... please get someone to proof read your work. There are so many mistakes and errors and wrong words it detracts from what you are trying to do and say.

One of her fuck buddies needs to give her a baby bump.

as long as it remains loving and consensual

" I do not want to lose you."

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Another bullshit story where the husband is making that statement and not the wife.

Great story had my pussy wet I think in the next story she needs to put to be made a hooker and made pregnant from gang bangs so no one knows the father is and her husband be cockhood made to keep her holes clean

Pity it turned out with him submissive- would have been better as a hot wife story, but that’s my taste, not yours. Too many errors for an enjoyable read, though I did enjoy ‘complected’ as an invention.

I do make a lot of typing errors. Sorry about that.

PERFECT.

I am working on my errors. Getting editors on this ap to help out is a chore. I recently started using Grammarly, so that should help with continuity and my many typing errors. Hang in there, I will get better.

It’s a funny thing but the hotter the story the less noticeable any grammatical mistakes are noticed. I didn’t notice any. Fantastic story.

Of course you make lots of errors: you're illiterate. One only needs to glance at your stories to know you probably dropped out of high school and wherever you work, if you have a job this month, one doubts you're making more than minimum wage. 2 stars.

Since this story I have started using Grammarly. I think my latest submissions have fewer errors. As for being illiterate? Apparently I am literate enough to write stories. What do you do, just complain about poorly edited stories, or do you have a suggestion to help improve my work?