All Comments on 'My Wife and I in Africa Pt. 01'

Quite a story, and believable, too. The non-native English makes it even hotter, in my estimation. The somewhat unusual word choices and sentence construction gives it a rawness hard to capture by a native English writer. I'd say go with what you're doing. It's plenty good the way it is!

I can see a situation like this developing if the husband doesn’t have control over his wife. A stronger man in a position to influence her has only to chance upon her alone and take her and satisfy her. She will not want to cause problems because there is a long time that they will be with the men so she submits allowing him to use her because her husband isn’t strong enough to stop him. She belongs to the men and is the camp whore. The husband is humiliated as she discovers she enjoys it.

One of the hottest stories I've read in a very long time. Came through half of it. Finishing it now, I am as wet as I can be.

Agree either the non English native writing, raw as hell and makes it hot.

Love the premise, the non con without violence, just heavy coercion. Would love to have this series continue.

really debauch him til he shits himself on a cock then make him clean it with his tongue