All Comments on 'My Wife at the Company Beach Party'

Standard stuff for this genre, but I liked it. The wife could have drawn out the teasing of her hubby more for my taste, though.

I especially liked it when Annie was sitting on Ed's(?) lap in the hot tub, and he puts his hands over her exposed tits, and says now no one can see them! A very good, light comic touch.

are unfucking believable. The author told you at the first of the story that it was a cuckold story. He or she further said if you don't like this type story, then don't read it.

You people remind me of idiots that read a fucking street sign that says "No Right turn on red", then turn red, and get hit with a fucking semi. What god damned part of no don't you comprehend?

The author was not writing for the moralists of the country. He or she was writing for the rest of us perverted fuckers that are honest enough to admit that is what we are when we click on a story and read it with obvious warnings, then get on a soapbox and say "BY GOD, I'd have shot her or what kind of man would allow this?"

go read the fucking bible or Gone With The Wind and stay the fuck off literotica.

"This story involves a wife knowingly and freely cheating on her husband right in front of him. If you don't appreciate cuckold stories, do not read this."

I agree with the previous poster. The disclaimer is about as plain as you can get at warning someone not to read if they don't like cuckold stories. they read it, comment on it, and vote, not for the ability of the writer, but for the aspect or genre of the story.

Thank you author for writing it. Good job.

It seems that some people have no idea how many couples enjoy watching their other flirt and have sex with others.

I liked the build up of your story.

The story was a good jerk off story. But no hotel would allow that type of horseplay and cumming in the hotel's hot tub will gt your ass kicked out. The husband is in fact a cuck and a poor excuse for a man.

I loved it. I love cuckold stories, and as you plainly prefaced the story, yours was a great cuckold story.

I am trying to figure out how commenters would show themselves to be such dumb asses as to read a plainly labeled cuckold story and then tell you they think cuckold stories are stupid. I think I know. Either way they are dumbasses, but I'm guessing these dumbasses didn't know the definition of the word 'cuckold'. They thought they were reading a story about a 'loving wife' that involved the preperation of fowl for dinner.

Maybe next time (and I dearly hope there is a next time) you should stick to layman's terms, or maybe translate for them. Such as:

"This is a cuckold story;

or for the verbally challenged...this story involves a cheating wife. Go Canes!"

..this was better than your last story although it is disturbingly similar ...so much so they're essentially the same story ..different names ..different setting ...same dynamics ... even same descriptions ...change!!

BRILLIANT STORY!! VERY VERY GOOD!!

I have known some really dumb men in my life but the only thing about this guy that makes me think it could ever possibly be true is that he is a lawyer.

I would not have been in the room when she got back. And, when she got home the locks would have already been changed.

Nothing wrong with a wife who likes to share her pussy with friends.

Her hubby doesn't know it but he is a lucky man.Most of the guys who don't understand cuckold husbands have butt ugly wives who nobody wants to fuck!

I gave this a five simply out of the pure brazenness of Anne. Reflecting on all of this and putting myself in the husband's place, though, I'm not so sure I could be so undecided. Considering his nature, his employ, etc. I think I'd be a rather pissed off dude. In fact, at the first mention of groping and pinching on the way to the resort, my reaction probably would have been to whip the vehicle around and cancel all plans until I got a good idea of just what was going on. Then I'd probably kick her cheating ass to the curb! This definitely isn't my normal reaction to cuckold stories, though ... it was just that darn persuasive! Which is why it got a 5 from me!

What the husband should have done was be by his wife's side and fend off the pack of wolves. He deserves little sympathy because he let it happen. He should have taken his wife up to their room and fucked the daylights out of her. She would be so sore that she wouldn't even think of a strange dick. Then he would get her to quit that job, or their marriage.

The story was crappy because of the dumb husband.

And the husband buys this pack of lies his wife is telling. Bull, the next day when he has time to think about it she would be out and the marriage would be in trouble one thing for sure she would have to find a new job. No man is that dumb, Wow another cuckold wimp story

Just to prove that it takes different strokes, I want to say that I enjoyed the story on its own terms. The plot might be unrealistic, but the action worked well on its own terms and I found it,, umm, err , stimulating.

I write often in this genre, sometimes with success. I never understand the people who are offended by the "cheating" . Why do they even bother reading these stories if that is how they feel?

I hope the author keeps treating us to more adventures.

Literotica is a volunteer submission site. Trashing someone writing for free serves no one.

good one, please write more.

Maybe she'd change her mind when the divorce papers come??

how many hubby in your family would go for that crap.

I've never left a review of a story here before, but I just had to for this one. I can't believe the way people review stories around here. They review it as if they think the author is saying, "Hey, check out this true story I just wrote." People....it's a FANTASY. It's FICTION. If you don't like the story at all, that's totally fine; but don't criticize it by saying the story is "totally unrealistic" or "what kind of wimp husband would do that?" Those criticisms make absolutely no sense, because this ISN'T NON-FICTION. Yeesh. That's like me saying, "What kind of sea captain would end up lashed to the side of a white whale? That could never happen....what an idiot! Herman Melville, you SUCK as a writer!"

I loved this story. It's a fantastic expression of a fantasy, at least in my opinion. Clark, please write more like this, I look forward to reading them. This one got bookmarked in my Favorites.

Cheers,

Dave

I love this story. No, not because I want to be just like the husband (though it would be nice to have a wife with a little bit of an adventuresome nature). But because it sends up the Loving/Slut Wife genre so well. The guy isn't clueless or stupid. His primary trait is indecisiveness. He wants to be sure he has all the facts, so he doesn't act at a key moment. He feels he should give her the benefit of the doubt, though almost nothing he sees would support even having a doubt, so he agrees something is innocent or accidental. Meanwhile, she knows him so well, she can play him even when she's drunk.

Okay, I'm starting to think it isn't a spoof so much as a psychological study using the unreliable-narrator technique. (Just the process of writing is making my thinking evolve.) The guy is fooling himself. He is indecisive because he likes what is happening, but is too well conditioned by social condemnation of anything off normal to admit to himself what he's feeling. He kind of observes he's aroused, but covers that with disapproval.

So, why doesn't he shut down her game? Because he likes it. Why doesn't he admit he likes it and maybe play along? Well, he's a hidebound lawyer who can't admit to nonstandard feelings. The tension between actual desire and the need to fit into society's designated mold yields his chronic indecision and inaction.

As for the comments, it seems the usually anonymous crew blasting this and other authors as perverts and wimps, etc., want all the free speech for themselves. They feel free to savage authors and dissenting commenters, but then stand by free speech when anyone criticizes their criticisms. They demand toleration of their own intolerance. This has to be having a chilling effect on authors.

This is essentially the same story as your previous posting with a different group of men. You used almost the same words at times.

It would probably be better for you as a writer if you developed a different - even slightly different - plot.

Loved it! I love the way she bounced up and down in the van along the bumpy road and plays down what happens.. more more please!

Yes, of course everyone has a right to an opinion on the story. But if you feel "wimp husband" stories are somehow depraved and subhuman, why bother reading such stories? I don't get it. You might as well search out every single cuckold story on here and say it's terrible, just because of the theme. But what's the point? Wouldn't you be better off emailing the Literotica editors and petitioning them to remove such stories?

My point was, feel free to critique the writing style, the use of language, grammar, the plot development, the characterizations the author made, whatever, in any of the stories on here. But what's the point of saying something like "Oh, it's another cuckold story with a wimp husband, therefore, it sucks, Q.E.D."? Isn't it self-evident that some people will like some subjects, and others won't? It'd be like me going to a rap concert just so I can tell everybody around me that I hate rap music--why bother?

To each his own. If someone out there doesn't like cuckolding stories, that's perfectly fine. It just doesn't seem like a very fair thing to critique an author here for his *choice of topic or theme* rather than his actual writing, given that the cuckolding theme is currently a valid topic and not a banned one.

Now, if you wanted to comment to the editors that perhaps the Loving Wives category should be split into more specific categories so that you don't have to read cuckolding stories, then maybe you've got a point there.

Cheers,

Dave

....the author says right at the beginning of this story, "If you don't appreciate cuckold stories, don't read this."

Look I don't mind reading cockold stories as long as the husband get a chance to fuck another woman in fronjt of his wife. Question: why is it the other way around, why can't a many fuck another womanin front of her husband and the wife eat the husband cum out of the other woman's cuunt and put up with the husband humiliating the wife by have lot of women in their marriage bed while she sit and watch. Even it up so that it could be more interesting.

I like pretty specific slutty wife stories and this was one. I don't like it when the husband wants the wife to cheat or when the wife is aggressive, so this story about a little, playful hottie who can't help herself is perfect. My girlfriend and I had to read this in two parts because when I got to the bit where she admits that the guys cock slides up her for a bit in the van, but plays it down as no big deal, I shot my load everywhere, something my girl has been teasing me about ever since.

Let me start out by saying that I thought the story was decent. There was a fair amount of sexual tension watching a clinical nymphomaniac exhibitionist wife get followed by her voyeur husband (who is conveniently afflicted with sexually-induced pathological denial). From the hand job in the pool to the sex in the van to the hot tub bang, the story is fun in a kind of kinky DSM-III case study sorta way. I could forgive her compulsion and his indecision as flip sides of the same coin. I could even see her using a hand job on her husband to sway him. And yet...

I could see her playing him – or trying to... but I can't see a lawyer (a paperwork mercenary fer fucks sake!) accepting "... his cock just sort of slipped up my cunt." Objection, yer honor! Even a character that might otherwise be subconsciously rationalizing himself into agreement to keep his supply of kink is going to reach a threshold where one psychosocial issue outweighs the other. Okay, he's profoundly pathological - that is, he's willing to let an enabling behavior overrule rational behavior. At this point, he hasn't reached the priority-flip threshold yet. He wants to see his slut in action (I say that in a good way) and he's willing to overlook her promiscuity.

But she goes on, as we expected she would. I quote Annie: "So we fucked for a bit until I felt his hot cum shoot way up in me. That's all that happened, hon. It's no big deal, right?" Whoa. Kinky, yeah, but wait... Stop. Think.

1) She just equated hand grenades with nuclear warheads.

2) She just gave full disclosure but minimizes it, stopping just short of affecting baby talk. Veiled condescension? Hm... personal prejudice alert: that kinda peeves me. I'll give the writer credit, though: she is using a handjob as a negotiation tactic (she's got a great future in politics).

3) But wait: He is an otherwise successful attorney who suddenly somehow can't argue a case that has significant personal bearing. The writer isn't being true to his own characters.

...I realize the flavor of the story is about a wife that runs willy-nilly and the husband that loves to watch. Nothing wrong with that, and I even cut the believability extra slack for being in the "unreliable narrator" class.* Unfortunately, though, hubby's utter inability to call her on it and start some honest communication strikes me as just far enough over the edge to screw up any suspension of disbelief I had. *That* is what knocked the story down a notch.

It's far better than a "00" but if a character is going to be as lucid and concerned as the husband is, he can't cave like he does in the end. For that, I give it a "75." If it was up to me (it's not), I'd give it one of two remixes in the close. Either:

1) They talk about it, become swingers and live happily ever after (easier but longer)...

*OR*

2) Hubby has a little more internal dialogue as she jacks him off where he comes to terms with it (could be short, but perhaps more of a challenge).

The end has its own kind of "hot" (especially with her closing "'I guess you do like it,' she purred."), but having the guy just roll over deflated the mood for me. Personal preference on one hand, but I still think the narrative isn't true the characters the writer created. Maybe if hubby was an accountant...

*Jasperscribbler, I've never heard the description before but it's a genius title for the category.

Although there wasn't lots of explicit sex, it was a sexy story. I thought that the ending could have been better though.

Good, memorable story; one I keep coming back to (no pun intended).

Good points:

- Gradual revelation to clueless husband of her growing indiscretions. Shown from his POV as he tries to deny, but has to accept, worse and worse news.

- Fairly imaginative situations where she has some plausible deniability at first.

- Realization that she's been doing this for some time.

Bad points:

- Language and narration a little coarse at times; tone inconsistent

- "Game" at the end felt contrived; blunted the impact of his wife's fooling around, since everyone (except the husband) seemed to be in on it.

Frankly, I had no problem temporarily identifying with an unappealing character (spineless husband) for the sake of the story. Lead characters can't always be heroes.

Also frankly, I'm "borrowing" the idea for a future story. Hubris, I guess; no reason to do this unless I thought I could do it better. We'll find out.

Great story!

My girlfriend came twice during her reading. She likes the theme a lot. I hope it will give us some nice adventures......

Lars

I'd have loved it if 'nicole' had decided to grind her sexy little pussy in 'my face' while everyone else was out liveing it up with the wife... A little 'shy yet wild' lovey dovey girl getting some quality sensuous pool side action with the poor little odd man out cucky husband everyone turned into the joke of the retreat...Hmmm.An Yummy little sensual slut;the little black dress type that loves random quickies and then goes and parks her cum filled pantys in her mans lap while they squirm and play until they end up in a nice slow slippery fuck watching and waiting while the wild hedonistic party goers fuck into exhuastion or come over to help her conquerd cucky get even more turned on by letting her suck cocks clean and watching her as he slowly fucks her ass with his little dick while they ravish pussy from inbetween her spread open legs depositing more and more cum on her breasts,face,and ass...While his wife is still being passed around from big hard cock to big hard cock begging for the big hard cock fucking that her little cucky couldnt give her;as she is moaning and screaming in extacy while telling her husbands work mates what a lousy fuck her good for nothing cucky is.

Disregard any of those comments from the ones who want to start shooting any woman who engages in extramarital sex and show off their hatreds and insecurities. Comtinue writing for the many of us who really do enjoy these type stories.

And I will admit that I would have liked to see the story end with an epilogue:: Yes! If you are wondering, Annie did get pregnant, and though I have never said a word, I am sure our baby boy was conceived during that week by one of her coworkers "flirting" with her.

very very hot exciting erotic & interesting story

i will read all your stories & i hope it will be that good

After all this is a fantasy based on cuckoldry. Though it doesn't address real concerns, it is what it is and it worked for me. I'm glad it wasn't the typical spit in his face and running off with another story. He signed off on all of her actions by his inaction. In reality a lifestyle like this, with it's carefree, multiple partner, and unprotected sex is like playing with a loaded revolver. Not to mention all of the psychological scars to you and all you claim to love. BUT, this is a fantasy. I enjoyed it. The husband got what he wanted.

Never ceases to amaze me the asswholes that read all the "Loving Wfe" genre and then bitch about it. They were warned in the first paragraph and still piss all over it afterwards. What kind of dumbasses do that? I write in the genre and have to put up with the low ratings and rants of these idiots. They're always the first to read the story, like they can't get enough, but then feel guilty about cumming all over their keyboards!

I enjoyed the story and that's what it's all about. Thanks for taking the time to write it.

Every time I read your story it feels like my heart will beat out of my chest. It is by far my fav story and I've been trying to search for similar ones, but nothing comes close.

CHANGE THE LOCKS,CALL HER PARENTS AND TELL THEM WHY YOU ARE DIVORCING HER...

IT'S OK FOR HER TO BE A SLUT ...BUT NOT BE MY WIFE....I COULD MAKE SOME MONEY CHARGING MEN TO HAVE SEX WITH HER(AFTER THE DIVORCE) MAYBE DURING THE DIVORCE..TO PAY THE LEGAL FEES..

with a coworker and it will be no big deal right. So what if you came in her pussy or she sucked your cock to get you hard again, it no big right honey.

...except that your wife is too busy getting fucked by every guy in her office to lie in it.

hot story, but hubby needs his turn to play with one of the other gals!

There are just way too many stories of wife making the husband the cuckold which means either there are a lot of guys/authors with closet inferiority complexes or this theme is easier to write.

I am hoping you will extend this story to expand on the wife's promiscuity because it is a common fact that once guys have been access they will proceed with their behavior at the office too. Will the wife be happy about this; what will the husband do?

This story is good but you have the potential to make it even better by introducing the practicalities. Revenge is definitely a popular avenue on this site but you also shown the character to have emotional strength.....

why does he stay married to the slut? when you have cancer you excise or burn it, do the same with these sluts

I think you owe it, to yourself, and your readers to write a sequel, if for no other reason just to get a higher score. TK U MLJ lV NV

If it had been my wife doing that I would have walked her to the door in the nude & put her in the hall telling her togo back to her studs .Then would have closed the door locking it. In the morning I would have just left her there as I wouldn't want her back. he works for alaw firm i would have sued all the guys who fucked her & the company too. called her mom& dad to pick up her things & tolded them why.

It reminds me of my girlfriend who worked in a similar office. Her first day as a temp, she walks into a conference room, and her boss is fucking his secretary on the desk. She also noticed a lot of the women would go bra less.The day her temp assignment was up, the company was going to hire one of three temps. she decided to go without a bra that day, and wear something real low cut, she said she was pouring out of her top. The men of the office were all lusting after her. Her boss noticed too, he calls her into his office and asks her, "Why should we keep you on?" "She brought up how she saw him fucking his secretary, and that she would be willing to do anything to keep the job. He kind of squirmed, and she came out and basically said, "I will suck your dick right here, right now!" She went around the desk and and got on her knees, unzipped his pants, and sucked his dick. She kept the job, but the boss always after that wanted to fuck her then. She kept him from fucking her for two years, though she did get felt up a lot. He got transferred after that. She did give him a goodbye blow job.

The sory is really good, but i think the husband should have been stronger with his wife. You could continue the story of this guy with Nicole and/or expand the ending making her sluttier (going on with your trend).

Excellent Loving wives story.

I agree with your comments. The author did warn all readers what to expect, so there shouldn't have been any controversial feedback. But good luck in getting this site to split "loving wives" genre. This story should have been put into a category called "slut wives" like so many other sites have. For some reason, even though it's been recommended by many readers this site won't change their setup. No comment on the story, didn't read it but do read comments, which often are more entertaining than the story.

However, I have a complaint : at the end of paragraph four, it says "she bought a new bikini for the weekend." The story only describes one day. What about the rest of the weekend? To the author: please post, or write, the other two days. This is such a great story, it would be a shame to not finish the rest.

Great story

a sequel to this amazing story

Is this kind of story supposed to be funny? Do most of the readers yearn for their high schools days laughing and cheering while some geek gets bullied? I don't get it and I don't think it is erotic. There certainly isn't going to be a happy ending.

She is a slut and i wouldnt stay with one like that. Once she cheated then the guy that fucked her is hers not me.

There is a fable about a camel who doesn't like being out in the cold and the sand-storms. He asks his Bedouin master if he can just stick his nose in the tent to protect it. Before long, the whole camel is in the tent. Sweetie starts out by sticking her camel-toe in the hot-tub! She finishes with enough extra liquid stored up to carry her to the next oasis!

Hubby reminds me of the professional wrestling referees who always manage to look away at the wrong time and in the wrong direction. They argue in the corner about a minor problem while the other teammate is getting whacked with a folding chair in mid-mat!

If Seriously Drunk Sweetiie can finagle Sober Legal Eagle Hubby THIS well while in her cups, he has NO chance at all. Just memorize the line "Yes, Dear! Of course, Darling! Anything you want, Honey! Sorry, Sweetie! Great idea, Sugar!" Then repeat as needed! (That is...in answer to anything she says!!) That will get Hubby through until she meets the Hung Hunk Heir with the Learjet! (As much as she'll be going out on the town from now on, that won't be too long!)

5*

Lickideesplit just made my night.

Well written tale about a fucking slut cheating whore bitch skank slut wife fucking others in front of her husband. That's all.

Dump the cunt.

At the beginning of the story it says that its a cuckold story and if you don't like it don't read it. There was a warning. I really enjoyed it. It would be nice to see a sequel.

Safer just getting a hand job from the slut - no idea what the cheating whore caught. Divorce

Love watching my wife suck swallow and fuck other guys

I wondered how this job was after the vacation and the last day of the vacation. The author has built a great foundation to a Bohemian 'festival ;the possibility for poor Annie are endless. Did Annie get promoted to special assistant to any key management person?? Well written erotic story. Thank you great read.

Thanks for the great story!

Not sure why people always hate on cuckold stories but I guess they are just projecting their own bitterness/misogyny/happened to them IRL.

Wow, wht Gary way to convince the hubby. Love to have such a bitchy sex crazy wife.

Its erotic seeing you gf/ wife flirting and maybe more. Those poor driven sods who choose to read then rant against it defy logic. Thanks for sexy story.

The turning point was the hot tub. The husband should have jumped in the tub, and taken Annie aside. He would tell her that it would be the 4 naked jokers or their marriage. If she chose the 4 jokers, he would leave then, and she need not return home.

The divorce for adultery would be filed on Monday, and the court would have her take a complete medical exam. All the people in the hot tub would be subpoened for the hearing. If any of the men have wives, they would learn what their husbands are really like. On the witness stand, under oath they would have to tell if they had sex with Annie. There may be a history here that she has been going behind the husband's back.

A second step would be a lawsuit for damages against Annie's company - their marriage and her moral outlook. It's called sexual harrassment based on the atmosphere in the office. Annie is not the woman he married. The lawsuit would be for millions of dollars. Annie would lose everything - home, car, savings, credit cards, and even her clothing in the house. She would be one of the first witnesses, and also lose her job. Her decision will cost her everything.

to see a sequel to this amazing story

Why didn't hubby nail Nicole... or one of the other girls ???

She reminds me my mom who once got fingered and fucked by several guys in a pool party

I would not have slept with her at the end - who knows what she might have "caught". And as for her "no big deal" comment. You can correct your "No" when you get home and file for divorce from a cheating slut. You want to stay married to a wife that thinks her actions were no big deal? I think not.

Are you people fucking retarded? First off, it is just a story and secondly, the author clearly mentions the nature of the story at the very beginning. If you're such prudes, why did you proceed after the warning? The story was totally hot and I fingered myself really hard. Twice.

I would love to see Annie get drunk once again and have many more encounters that she passes off as not a big deal. I love it when she says that the guy just stuck it in and it wasn't a big deal, and I would love to read more.

This story is one of my all time favorites - great job!

If you make a sequel or ch2, don't continue making the husband out to be a wimp or cuckold, rather, write in where he fights back and she this time finds him with a few hotties that make her extremely jealous and should be. after men don't like sloppy seconds especially in her circle. I am of course noticing how the other men don't seem to mind the other women going almost nude.

The handjob was probably my favorite scene.

I've read three of your stories so far. I loved the first one, and I'm disappointed that the other two are copies of the first one. Seriously? This story (and the other two I read) read as if you just re-wrote the same story and changed the location/names.

Also, I have no problem with cuckold stories, but I have a problem with stories without resolutions. Unlike the cuckold stories I'm used to, the guy doesn't actually seem to like his wife having an affair, meaning we need to know what happens next. This kind of story needs an epilogue or something, cause it ends without an actual ending. We never learned what his wife would say when she's not drunk, and how he would respond to an actual conversation about this.

Overall, you're a good writer and you have a lot of potential. I understand this is based off another work, but basing all of your stories off the same work is how you end up with all of your stories being exactly the same. Also, try writing complete stories next time. Good job, and keep writing.

If my wife acted like Anne there would be some serious trouble.

I do not think our relationship would survive and the company would seriously regret their casual attitudes

Great Story

This is my all-time favorite slut wife story. I love how she treats him like an idiot. I love how she plays innocent. I want more of Annie...

Annie is a fantastic slut wife. Wish my wife was just like her as I would love her to be shared and well used just like Annie

and like a fool Ii still read it.

stupid is as stupid does.

why be married if you don't mind if she fucks everyone in the company?

You should do the story again from the viewpoint of the wife. People need to lighten up. Sex can be very fun to watch!

You have your wife anny take on tha hole beach party aswell as the back of the bus section.

Too good for me an my friend hear in the D'house just dont pick it up when dem girls are around.We'be safe now end all have constent errect and touchit to!!

Dont go to dem shops hard or police siren time,,,,haha!

Rite moor is a must for us all,and maybee we can than domenate tha shit.

Piece out<<<<<<Gfunk))

and she better make sure the string doesn't break, TK U MLJ LV NV

I DO NOT LIKE THIS SLUT STORY. THIS STORY IS A PIECE OF SHIT. THE WOMAN IN THE STORY IS A WHORE. I DO NOT LIKE STORIES WITH WHORES IN THEM. THERE ARE TOO MANY WHORES IN LIFE LET ALONE I HAVE TO READ A STORY WITH A WHORE IN IT. WHY DID YOU WRITE THIS STORY WITH A WHORE IN IT? WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM DUMB ASS? YOU COULD CHOOSE TO WRITE ABOUT ANYTHING AND INSTEAD YOU CHOOSE TO WRITE ABOUT THIS SHIT. WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM DUMB ASS? YOU ARE REALLY STUPID? ARE YOU A PATHETIC FOOL? ARE YOU A LOSER? IS THIS WHY YOU WRITE THIS SHIT? IS THIS WHAT YOU THINK OF WOMEN? IF YOU TREAT WOMEN LIKE WHORES THEY WILL TREAT YOU LIKE THE DUMB ASS THAT YOU ARE. YOU REALLY ARE A DUMB ASS. YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO TREAT A WOMAN. YOU TREAT A WOMAN LIKE SHE IS A PIECE OF FURNITURE. DO YOU WANT A WOMAN WHO IS LIKE A PIECE OF FURNITURE DUMB ASS?

WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM?

WHAT IS YOUR FUCKING PROBLEM DUMB ASS?

WHY DO YOU WRITE THIS SHIT.

THIS IS JUST MY OPINION. MAYBE SOMEONE ELSE WILL DISAGREE. MAYBE THERE WILL BE A DUMB ASS WHO LIKE THIS STORY.

THERE IS 7 BILLION PEOPLE IN THIS FUCKING WORLD. I GUESS THERE IS A DUMB ASS OUT THERE WHO WILL LIKE THIS STORY.

I AM NOT A DUMB ASS AND I DO NOT LIKE THIS STORY.

I THINK YOU ARE A DUMB ASS. NO OFFENSE BUT I DID NOT LIKE YOUR STORY.

I THINK WOMEN ARE LIKE TREASURES. I DO NOT HAVE A WOMAN MYSELF BUT IF I DID HAVE A WOMAN I WOULD NOT TREAT HER LIKE A WHORE. I WOULD TREAT HER LIKE A BUTIFUL PAINTING AND I WOULD LOOK AT HER ALL THE TIME. I WOULD KEEP HER CLEAN. I WOULD KEEP HER VERY NICE. IF I HAD A WOMAN I WOULD BE VERY GOOD TO HER. I WOULD FEED HER AND KEEP HER CLEAN. I WOULD TREAT HER LIKE A GOD. I WOULD BE VERY GOOD TO HER. I WOULD KEEP HER CLEAN AND KEEP HER HAPPY. I WOULD BUY HER CLOTHES. I WOULD GO TO VICKY SECRET AND BUY MY WOMAN ALL THE CLOTHES SHE WANTS. I WOULD BUT HER SEXY UNDERWEAR. I WOULD LIKE IT VERY MUCH IF SHE PUT ON THIS SEXY UNDERWEAR. IF SHE WANTS TO SHE CAN PUT IT IN MY MOUTH. MAYBE SHE WANTS TO PUT IT IN MY MOUTH. SOMETIMES PEOPLE SAY THAT I TALK TOO MUCH.

IN THE MOVIE RAIN MAN THE MAN CAN COUNT TOOTH PICKS THAT FALL OUT OF THE BOX. HE SAYS, I'M AN EXCELLENT DRIVER. HE SAYS A LOT OF FUNNY THINGS.

FOREST GUMP WAS ANOTHER GREAT MOVIE. FOREST SAID THAT LIFE IS LIKE A BOX OF CHOCOLATES. YOU NEVER NO WHAT YOU ARE GOING TO GET. THAT IS TRUE.

I ALSO LIKE THOMAS JEFFERSON. HE WAS A GREAT MAN.

I ALSO LIKE EDISON. DID YOU KNOW THAT IT TOOK HIM MORE THAN 1,000 TRIES TO INVENT THE LIGHT BULB.

I KNOW A LOT OF STUFF.

BACK TO THE STORY. IT SUCKED. SORRY BUT I TELL IT LIKE IT IS.

I HOPE YOU LIKE TO NO THE TRUTH. IF NOT THEN I CAN TELL YOU THAT YOUR STORY WAS REALLY GOOD. IT WAS A GREAT STORY. OH GOSH, I REALLY LOVE IT. THIS WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ. I REALLY LIKE THE WAY YOU MAKE THE GIRL SEEM LIKE SUCH A NICE SLUT. I REALLY LIKE THAT. I LIKE THE WAY YOU RIGHT ABOUT A WHORE. YES. IT WAS REALLY GOOD. MY COCK IS HARD JUST THINKING ABOUT IT RITE NOW. I WANT THAT WHORE TO SUCK MY COCK. YOU RIGHT ABOUT IT SO GOOD. I WANT TO GET HER TO SUCK MY COCK.

WHAT THE FUCK IS YOUR PROBLEM DUMB ASS? CAN'T YOU TAKE A JOKE. YOUR STORY WAS FINE. NO. IT WASN'T FINE. IT WAS GREAT.

DO YOU FEEL BETTER NOW?

I HOPE YOU CAN SLEEP AT NIGHT.

IF I WROTE THIS KIND OF TRASH GARBAGE I COULDN'T SLEEP AT NIGHT.

WHAT IF THIS WAS YOUR DAUGHTER THAT YOU WERE WRITING ABOUT? HOW WOULD THAT MAKE YOU FEEL?

WOULD YOU LIKE IT IF YOUR DAUGHTER WAS A WHORE? i THINK YOU WOULD. I THINK YOU WOULD WANT TO FUCK YOUR DAUGHTER. AM I WRITE? I KNOW I AM. OH KNOW I THINK I JUST GAVE YOU THE IDEA FOR YOUR NEXT PIECE OF SHIT STORY.

LIFE IS LIKE A BOX OF CHOCOLATES

YOU NEVER NO WHAT YOU ARE GOING TO GET

OK DUMB ASS

I LOVED YOUR STORY

LOVE

BOB

so loved the story - my wife has done much the same a few times now. gets me soo horny watching her play.

Sluts make the best wives, as long as you don't mind sharing.

Slut wives are the best especially mine when she wants me to lick her used pussy and giggles while she tells me to eat her boyfriends cum. yum O

DON'T NEGLECT YOUR WIFE.

Especially whem she wants to have fun

Loved your story, I like how the wife never seemed to think she was going to far or cheating, really adds to the anticipation. Keep writing.

Sorry, this story was writen to make the husband a moron, with a low intellect...I know is a comedy for making us laugh, but long gone is the time to laugh about idiots...

i would be divorcing the bitch if she was my wife

Yeah I liked this story. I'm wundering why he didn't tag that BIG TITS with the bellyring. I mean she offered her big fine ass right there, & this dude to dumb to know it. Ahh well itsstill a good "wackin story"!!

Thanks I enjoyed it, simple, lots a action, good discriptions & a bit of comedy.

if she was my wife i would have divorced her and thrown her out of the house

fucking bitch

According to your story, the wife is either a clueless moron or she doesn't care that she just trashed her marriage. Either way her demeaning, degrading and humiliating her husband is going to have far reaching repercussions. Through her actions and words (It's no big deal?) she has clearly demonstrated to her husband that she neither loves nor respects him. That her marriage vows mean nothing. I seriously doubt he'll spend the night in that bed. When he recovers from the momentary "little head rules" law, he's going to pack and head out. I bet he'll be at the bank the next morning cleaning out the accounts and cancelling the credit cards. Next stop, the divorce attorneys. One of the things I really disliked about this story was that it was unfinished. You never dealt with the fallout from her actions. And I really don't like stories in which the main characters are so unlikeable. She's a common cheating slut. And he comes off looking like a complete fool. Nothing really interesting or entertaining about this sad mess. No stars.

What a whore! What a dumb ass! Funny and erotic, though.

Hope he enjoys the STD's, and the kid. Maybe someday she'll find herself a husband instead of a dickless drone.

and what he is going to get TK U MLJ LV NV

He was stupid and she a whore....but what kind of firm she worked? They doing all that during working hours, the firm should be bankrupt a long time ago...This story just for us to laugh...1*

What type of puss would actually like to see his wife with another man? Pathetic.

it's not time to walk away , it's time to RUN.

seeing as her female co workers all seem to think she is soooo lucky to have him as her husband ... perhaps the 1st thing he should say to her in the morning is ....

when do i get to fuck nicole , molly & christine ???

depending on her answer , the 2nd thing he should ask her is ....

where would you like the divorce papers served ???

I don't like vampire & zombie movies and i never watch them.

Loving wife & voyeur husband stories are a genre, very much like certain movies... When an ex CIA agent or Navy Seal takes on 200 members of Russian mafia and kills them all, we know it is a movie.

When a wife fucks 4 guys in one day while the husband is either watching or is just 20 yards away, it is a story, gentlemen.

clarkoverns writes good stories, this one is not his best (or worst for that matter) but it did get 100 (ONE HUNDRED) comments, including this one. People read it, & 100 of us have bothered to submit a comment.

SOME WOMEN AND SOME MEN HAVE CHEATED ON THEIR SPOUSE SINCE FOREVER. D.N.A. HAS PROVEN THAT THERE ARE NO TRULY MONOGAMOUS SPECIES ON EARTH. HOMO SAPIENS IS NO EXCEPTION IN THAT REGARD.

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A piece of advice:

If you share your car, you get less miles out of it; if you share your wife, you lose nothing, she may even last longer.

... & if you have a voyeur side, you might get a kick out of it

You spouted out a falsehood. Your statement that dna evidence has proven that there isn't any monogamous species isn't true. Your line about if you share your wife you have lost nothing is only YOUR opinion. In MY opinion you lose that unique and trusting connection. Quit trying to pass off bullshit as scientific fact and phrase your opinions as such.