by RhondaParker54
I loved the story but it needed proof reading before it went to print.
Please don't make that mistake again it takes away from the enjoyment of the story.
This is a super super story The man's wife was super she didn't try to change him and she fit right in with them this is a super story more stories like this should be made for people to read
This was a nice story but the detailing of it was becoming quite confusing because Jane seemed to be becoming more into Ronda than her husband making him more of a servant than a spouse and caging away what man hood he had left. It felt as though Jane was wanting Ronda more so than her husband but through the story there was talk of love, my look at this story makes me feel that Jane would rather be with Ronda more over Michelle.