All Comments on 'My wife enjoys her first, Other guy'

by Jason40

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WatchingthewatcherWatchingthewatcherabout 1 year ago

Well, interesting so far. Moved pretty quickly, but I will read the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The second I read that your story was real I knew it was bullshit and stopped. I have to wonder. Are there no white guys cuckolding women in your narrow mind? Why is it first time writers think that it must be a black guy who's doing the dirty deed? Is that supposed to be the ultimate humiliation for a white guy? To watch his wife fucking not just another man, but one with dark skin. As a writer you'll go nowhere, if this trash reaches a score of 2 I'll be amazed.

welderwonderwelderwonderabout 1 year ago

I am certainly intrigued by your first PART and look forward Part 2. You leave a vivid impression of the group and want to read more.

AhboomAhboomabout 1 year ago

Damn where is part 2

AhboomAhboomabout 1 year ago

Damn where is part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Do not want to wait for another story. Now you got a no vote

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 1 year ago

Pretty good start ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

"To be cont......"

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No chapter number = automatic rating of 1.

OOAAOOAAabout 1 year ago

Hot story!! Go on soon please ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Way to short. What a disappointment. You build us up then let us down.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Erotic not demeaning to any person lovingly to each other. Super qualities for a story that leaves a positive sexual encounter for all. Reminds me of my wife's encounter great memories all positive. But finish the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

terrible. some advice - think about what you are writing. do people say 'LOL' or 'OMG'? They don't. Also anon below says 'not demeaning to any person' ? Bro, the guy is literally like 'he's also a black man' as a reason for why his wife shouldn't be with him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Please Continue the story. Build up is great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

1 out of 5 at least finish ur story not much here but lies and a cheating wife why have cuckold as a tag this feels more like an adultery story

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great story, needs a conclusion!!!

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