by Jason40
Well, interesting so far. Moved pretty quickly, but I will read the next chapter
The second I read that your story was real I knew it was bullshit and stopped. I have to wonder. Are there no white guys cuckolding women in your narrow mind? Why is it first time writers think that it must be a black guy who's doing the dirty deed? Is that supposed to be the ultimate humiliation for a white guy? To watch his wife fucking not just another man, but one with dark skin. As a writer you'll go nowhere, if this trash reaches a score of 2 I'll be amazed.
I am certainly intrigued by your first PART and look forward Part 2. You leave a vivid impression of the group and want to read more.
Erotic not demeaning to any person lovingly to each other. Super qualities for a story that leaves a positive sexual encounter for all. Reminds me of my wife's encounter great memories all positive. But finish the story.
terrible. some advice - think about what you are writing. do people say 'LOL' or 'OMG'? They don't. Also anon below says 'not demeaning to any person' ? Bro, the guy is literally like 'he's also a black man' as a reason for why his wife shouldn't be with him.
1 out of 5 at least finish ur story not much here but lies and a cheating wife why have cuckold as a tag this feels more like an adultery story