All Comments on 'My Wife, My Queen Ch. 01'
by Dilberts_dream
- 14 Comments
Anonymousabout 14 years agoI enjoyed it a lot. Nice pace and progression, and you really seem to have a feel for the dynamic of this situation. I'm eager to read more...
Anonymousabout 14 years agoSame old tired wimpy husband themes. You're destroying the loving wives genre with your fetish. Zero score for a zero writer. Go away!
Anonymousabout 14 years agoHe has lost his wife forever. She is training him as a sub. He could not go down of the cream pie. Her reply was ok that he would learn to do it in the future. He was hard for her but she told him that she was tired and take care of him tomorrow. Hopefully he will have her tomorrow because it will be few and far between the next pleasure he receives from her. Her main goal is her new lover and she will enjoy him while her husband suffers in frustration. Over time he will just be a servant to his wife and her lover and just someone to pay the bills and raise the lovers children. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoWriting was okay, quite a few plot holes but workable.
Anonymousabout 14 years agobut a good read. Don't let the trolls get to you. They were all on the wrong end of a woman who found what they could not give them elsewhere and hate stories like this regardless of how well written they are.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoThe writing was good, not great. I sense that your theme, your main priority in writing this story, was to showcase the love of a husband for his wife in a cuckold relationship. You accomplished this quite easily and clearly. In the further chapters, I recommend that you steam up the sex. Please keep writing.
o1dirtydogabout 14 years agoIf you post a cuck story on this site and don't get at least 2 trolls it's a fail. Looking forward to more from you. ty
Anonymousabout 14 years agoLove the story, looking forward to more.
Where can I find a woman like that?
Anonymousover 12 years agoThat's it...he'll learn to like sucking dick by proxy. What man wouldn't? Then you can have him learn to suck dick directly, take one up the ass, blah blah blah. FFS!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoWhy would any man stay with a self centered, egocentric bitch that had no concern for his well being?
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