by Fantasyballer
One way to get a cheap deal on a car I did not think car salesmen were that easy to get a deal done like that
Great story thanks
I started following this series when it started back in October, and enjoyed the previous chapters. By comparison, this chapter looks as if the author rushed it out or ran out of ideas. The story line is flimsy, not developing the characters at all.
The author could have done more; for example, created a twist in the ending. Maybe after the sex scene, the car dealers refuse to honor the deal - what would the narrator and his wife do then? Complain on social media? This is just one wild idea; it's not my role to tell the author what to write, but this story is so basic that it was hardly worth the (small) effort.
I think the author should pick this series up and develop it, or terminate it somehow. The termination itself could be interesting and erotic.