All Comments on 'My Wife with the Pool Cleaners'

by Luclopez

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Harryin VAHarryin VAover 1 year ago

Please never write again

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another racist story that shows she was just a whore at sight.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Run, don't walk, to the nearest divorce attorneys office.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

NO and hell NO...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Trolling the Loving Wives group, how original…… NOT. LMAO

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Here, cunt. Have a uno culo estrella and git tha fock away back to the local latrine yah came from.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

another new wimp/cuck writer. see if that brain can write something original. 1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

not much to it to rate.

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

Did you write this to mess with little boys' brains?

I mean, for real, it is a silly parody

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Aaawww... Poor little white cracker honky and his tiny little emasculated dicklette using his cucky boy imagination to spew his spermless juice onto the website in a weak effort to make himself feel even more worthless and inadequate. How pathetic a life you must lead if your fantasies echo your real life. Excuse me while I puke and rinse my mouth out after reading your regurgitation of maggoty thoughts.

SwordWielderSwordWielderover 1 year ago

Please add a warning at the beginning of your stories that are the hot wife/sharing/cuckold type. That way those of us you do not care for that genre can avoid that story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Not bad for a first time. I think if you would have stretched this out a bit more it would have helped. Stories here seem to work best when they are at least two pages.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

My wife got us in trouble with the HOA. She was fucking the pool guy out back and unfortunately she was so loud that some of the neighborhood kids watched. We offered to put up an 8 foot privacy fence but they wont allow it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

whenever I am laying out by our pool, letting that hot sun bake my body, I always daydream about sexy men. This story is going to have me dreaming of two sexy black men as I lay out tomorrow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Racist trash. The moment I read the title I knew it would be black guys with unrealistic sized cocks pumping the little white wife. You honestly couldn't find a better topic for your first story?

fishgetterfishgetterover 1 year ago

""""cuckold bbc hotwife cheating""""" Damn Sword dweller how many more descriptions do YOY need? You can see any tabs if you open the TAG icon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

nothing...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

@swordweilder (seriously, what are you, 12 years older.) No one has to warn you that a story is about Hotwives or sharing. Are you seriously that ignorant that you don’t know what the Loving Wives category is about? Take a moment to read the description posted on the main page. If you want a story about a loving wife, go to Romance. If you want a story about other men loving another man’s wife, the stay here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Mmmmm sexy, sweaty black men.

PrfsrPrfsrover 1 year ago

Seriously, the story is absolutely awful and the writing is terrible.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 1 year ago

First story! Hope his pool was cleaned.

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timrivtimrivover 1 year ago

Such disrespect deserves a divorce, on another point why do all the husbands have tiny dicks on this site?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Let see if you can learn. Interracial category is best suited for stories of this kind. I know it must be surprising to you but that is why they have that category. Hopefully you got it.

dossbigdossbigover 1 year ago

It made her happy, what else matters?

iammweaseliammweaselover 1 year ago

Would you be offended if I said this wasnt very good?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

My problem was not the pool cleaners it was our horse trainer. Damn me for getting off earlier than normal so I thought I would go watch my wife Irene ride her horse at the stables. When I walked in I didn't see anyone. Then I seen Robbie the trainer riding one of our horses into the arena then Irene on our other horse .I thought I would just step out of sight and watch and listen. A lot of the talking was just normal talk. But later Irene asked why are riding Neal's horse I'm Neal? Well I thought if I can ride his wife I can ride his horse. She said you better hope Neal never finds out. Finds out what that I screwed you and may actually be little Dales father. You got me drunk and took advantage of me when Neal was away and it will never happen again. I left as quietly as possible and called Irene saying I was going to go to the stables to ride are you there yet? I've been here for a little bit. See you soon love you. Love you too. The stables had a barn party for all of their customers while I was out of town and the timing was possible if they had unprotected sex. I was determined to have DNA test on Dale and I. Back to the day my horse was in his stable when I got there and Robbie was not around how did the sneak get away that quick? Irene acted normal. I said Irene I'm surprised that you are riding alone. Robbie just left. Really I'll saddle up and we can go out on the trail if you want. Sounds good. Everything was as normal as I could tell. That night I ordered online DNA kits NDA next day air. I received the kits and sent them to the lab NDA and paid extra for quicker results. Everything was to and from my my office. One evening as I came in I heard Irene talking to a friend on the phone and heard her say that she was going to talk to me about moving to a different stable because of Robbie was hitting on her. She never said anything about already letting Robbie screw her. She said she didn't want anything thing to happen and caused her marital problems. That was the day I got the results and I haven't opened them yet. I opened the door again and shut it as if I just got in. Hello I said. Hey I got to go Neal's home talk to you later. She walked into the kitchen and said hey babe hug and kiss. I returned the same. She said Neal I would like to talk to you please. O this sounds bad is it bad I asked? She hugged me and started crying saying yes it's bad please I need to talk. Ok I said talk. Remember Neal I love you and only you but I made a stupid mistake about 2 years ago when you were gone on that Kentucky project. I went to the that barn party that the stables had. I drank to much and Robbie took advantage of me being drunk. It only happened once I don't remember much but he had me on the trunk of his car. After that he brought me home and no he didn't come in or nothing else has ever happen. I think he was actually scared for what he done but lately he's been hitting on me again. A while back that day that you actually came to ride with me he was hitting on me and said that he could be Dale's father. I sorry for drinking too much and for allowing him to take advantage of me. Above all please forgive me I love you and only you please give me another chance. If you want we can get test and make sure you are Dale's father and if not and you can't forgive me I'll leave you and take Dale but I beg you please forgive me and give me another chance. I picked up the envelope and said let's find out together if I'm the father. She looked at me and asked how did you know. I was at the stables to surprise you but I was the one who was surprised. I didn't want to go off on you and him with out proof. I handed her the envelope. She asked if I would open it. I pulled the papers out and held her as I turned them over so we both could see at the same time. She spoke first saying Thank You God and I love you daddy. I said I love you too but it's not that easy. She said I understand what do I do to help? Ask Marie down the road to spend some time with me. She playfully slapped me. I just looked. She looked at me then finally said you are serious aren't you? I said no but we will be moving to a different barn and I for sure be talking to Robbie. Robbie got the message and we didn't have to move he decided to move.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What a surprise. More cuck shit on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

FTDSTORY

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story! If she ever makes you suck their combined cum off that bbc, then tell us about it next time! 😉

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New erotica writer that enjoys the craft of writing and the ideas. I also write other genres but I want to try my hand at erotica since I'm a fan of the genre