by Bigbottombabe
The husband character needs to get out of his head and engage with his wife more than just stick it in and shoot. The story plot is very simplistic and shows no character development other than an erect cock with a man child attached.
Sorry. But there's nothing original, clever or entertaining about this mess. Are the kids even his biological children? How long has she been cheating? Does she have any diseases? Ugly story of stupidity and abuse.
1 star
Comparing this with your other story, you're either paranoid or you need a new wife. Sniffing beds and buttholes can't be a lot of fun.
But lost s point because it’s based on his noticing a cum stain and smelling it.
Like really?
Not sure it adds value to LW
All her other fuckers get her only for a few hours. But then they don't have to pay all the bills. So she has her cake and has him eating it too. Pathetic, but as Curly said, his choice.
Write the sequel, where he learns she's made all the choices, and he is no longer part of them.
If sex is better; do nothing. If tall watch porn; get some hotwife porn and see how she reacts.