All Comments on 'My Wife's Massage'

Just another WACC in denial.

The problem was that it wasn't long enough for any character development, so there wasn't really a story here. And the sex was pathetic at best. So it failed as a stroke story. Maybe next time an editor? Or even better proof reading. As it sits this just isn't interesting or entertaining. And I need to agree with a previous commentator. If you're going to post a picture in your Bio at least make it a hot one.

Im not a professional writer and at least I write the story as it happens. You will notice that I do not have many submissions because my life isn't bullshit! Im doing my best so im sorry if I wasted your time.

You really expected positive feedback about a cuck story? Your character likes watching men use his wife. That's fucked up. Don't matter if its legal, popular, or just fiction. It's still a fucked up theme. And you should know that from the typical reactions to previous similar stories.

Not sure what is lucky or erotic about not being able to satisfy your wife.

I believe you are doing your best and I admire you for having the courage to publish. Regrettably, your writing talents are limited (as are the talents of many writers on this site) so I wonder if you would be better off just reading as I do.

How the hell then does he she it IT tell others what they are good at? He's a asshole!! This story is good, I gave it a 5!!!

But if you do have D.N.A. done, when you realize you are not the father you can jack off for a month.

and needs editing.

Or do you just stand around like a little dummie and watch. Sorry but if my wife was getting laid than I damm sure would also.

This story has too many incongruencies...1st - was he sure that his wife didn't xchange emails with the masseuse and had combined with him all that happened? 2nd - I don't think that any masseuse in any part of the world would risk to go to jail by being accused of rape; 3rd - In the end he still payed him? 4th - She din't try to resist at least a little? so 1*

Masseuse is feminine, the wife in this tale was fucked by a masseur (masculine).

What a dope he is and a total pig his wife is

just read the story. bottom line if you just have to see another cock in your wife,find a different outlet this could happen and you both could have been found headless.......just sayin if you haven't posted a story shut your suckhole

Since when does one have to post a story to criticize one? Any author that reads anything in this category should know that willing humiliating cuckold stories are not well received.. So if you post one of those in this category, why are you surprised that you get low scores and negative comments? Surely you didn't expect great praise and four star ratings, did you? Wishful thinking.

If that was my wife the so called masseur as soon as he got his cock out and aimed it at her mouth he find himself laid on his back and minus his fee.

Thanks for the critical feedback. I'm not a writer and I only shared my stories so I wouldnt forget them! Needs editing, yeah most likely but I'd rather share than not remember the particulars.

Thankyou to those who supported my writing.

his wife enjoyed a rough satisfaction