by SexyTimeStories69
Hot n sexy, I hope this works out for them as a couple and maybe a baby or two to complete their family.
Sensational! Please make her pregnant so they can fuck as her body swells. Then let him suckle her milk after their baby is born. More please!
I look forward to your other works. I hope that you will pace the story so you can allow the reader to get a better mental image of the scene and the participants. Allow the heat to build up s l o w l y
Great story, I love a mom and son who fuck together well. I like to cum inside the best myself, I enjoy the feeling of it the most! Please don't have mom get pregnant right away as steve437 almost begged for a day ago. They need time just to fuck for the sake of fucking alone. Maybe a day when they're both off and can fuck all day and into the morning?
I did enjoy this story and I hope there will be more chapters.
The pacing seemed a little odd to me, which is what another user also pointed out.
A little more build-up wouldn't hurt.
Writing longer chapters is time-consuming, so choosing to keep them a little shorter is understandable.
There are a lot less typos here than in the previous chapter and I mostly noticed them because I am looking for them in my own stories.
Perhaps the built-in editors programmes like Word have could help you with that.
Good luck!
Awesome I'm glad you continued with this 5 stars waiting to read next part!!!!!!!!!!!!