All Comments on 'My Young Hot Mom Pt. 03'

Ok story but moving pretty fast and what's up with sneaking in m/m sex ? I think you would get higher ratings with f/f sex.

Please add tags with gay sex next time. So people that doesn’t like it knows before wasting time reading about it. Thanks

need an editor for all 3.

Glad you both are so comfortable with the situation that has evolved. (Didn't want to give it away).

A few typos or tense variants that you might locate by reading aloud.

Ruined it with the gay sex.

Ditto on the missing tags.

I gave 5 stars to the first two. The MMF threesome on how this latest one ended was a real turn off. I believe it was an unpleasant shock to more readers than just me. Maybe if there was a more complete synopsis after the title, as in “they visit an adult bookstore end end up MMF” it wouldn’t have been so off putting, or some would have chosen to pass up reading it.

This was a good 3 part story. As to the anonymous posters, get over the MMF threesome. You do not have the fortitude to post under your name. They were in an adult store and man to man is common there. Get over it!

Why are their no tags about gay sex and mmf?

Why is it so hard for stories to be properly tagged?

Part 3 was forced on so may levels. It felt like the author put his own fanatsies in their without building up to it.

IT TURNED MY STOMACH AND TOTALLY RUINED THIS STORY!!!!!

Ok went to far with the gay sex dial it down this maybe your fantasy but it isn't the rest of ours on gay sex that's fucking sick

it was such a good story until he shared her with other guys.

It was going so good till you decided to turn it into a group sex - what a mood killer !

This series was well done! I definitely loved it, even though I usually go for longer, more fleshed out, tales this one hit all the bases- Great Job! As for all the negativity and hate I see below- a BIG part of being a creator these days is being able to take constructive criticism, and let the hate roll on by. It's your work, i.e. your vision of what you find hot, and the actions and choices that your OC's make. As long as it doesn't kill the narrative (like in a writing fiction 101 sense), they're your choices and yours alone. If you ever feel the need to correct any hate from the consumers of your content... that's what fan-service pieces are for lol. Keep up the good work. -Tysvm 😘

Gave it 5 stars but I did not care for the part in the booth it should only be mother and son in the relationship, continue with more of this with them having more children and loving each other and moving away and living as a married couple!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Every mom should let son fuck them once take chanc getting knock up I know knocked up my mom even got my aunt mom sister my aunt even said bastard knocked me up mom said you wanted fuck him even go home your place pack your clothes moving in with us she both of them each gave me 2 kids each

Sharing with outsiders messed it up!otherwise it wold have been 5 stars!

Very nice story but I did not care about the booth part I'm glad she got pregnant you should write more of this story with them having more children and living as a family in some other country. Gave it a 4 because of the booth part.

Loved it very well written didn't care for the both part she should be just for her son> Loved that she got pregnant you should have continued until she had the baby and then maybe more!!! 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved it and mom getting pregnant was awesome didn't care for that sharing thing it should be just love between mother and son 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!

Not too keen on the Adult video booth. Keeping it between the two of them, now showing the pregnancy test strip. Next chapter please

*sigh* another story where a hot sexy mom is nothing more than a whore, fucking and sucking strangers...just what every son wants.

Like everybody else said, the story took a wrong turn. I can see why it ended here.